People can know about culture and life through internet. So there is no need to travel to other countries to know about cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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today's world of technology and
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, it has often been perceived by many
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one can learn about the life and culture of a
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without any need to travel
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. In my opinion, I completely disagree with
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view as visiting and interacting to learn about the
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is
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different and fulfilling experience.
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easy access to the
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it is quite convenient to gain knowledge of the places, their history, cultures, tourist attractions and even view them virtually online.
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, Google
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almost makes the person feel as if they are really walking on the streets and looking at the buildings around them in any city in the world. But all
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still can't match the feel of experiencing them live.
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images found online often undermine the true ambience of the
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knowledge gained online can help people plan their trip better so that they can get
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out of it,
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it cannot act as
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substitute
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visiting the
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. Cultures and
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can only be understood better when
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with the native people and participating in cultural activities.
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has proved that humans feel more enriched and fulfilled, learn and imbibe foreign culture better when visiting those places physically.
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, I believe that online information is good for organising the trip better to
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the experience and learning of the culture and life of the
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but
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cannot replace the need for travel.

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Check spelling and punctuation, and break long sentences into two.
task response
You state a clear view and keep it through the essay.
coherence
You give examples to support your view and try to connect ideas.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural education
  • virtual museum tours
  • cultural documentaries
  • online platforms
  • social media
  • cultural immersion
  • authentic cultural contexts
  • personal growth
  • cultural empathy
  • digital experiences
  • language skills
  • cultural nuances
  • life-changing
  • perspectives
  • direct interaction
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