In spite of advances made in agriculture,many people around the world still go hungry Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

The development in the science and technology has contributed a lot in agriculture sector. Despite of modern techniques and advance technology in agriculture, large number of people are still under starvation.In
this
essay I intend to discuss possible problems band their solutions. People are starving due to environmental degradation. Though there
are
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plenty of agricultural land
,
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,
it still lacks the sufficient
production
of agricultural products.It is all due to pollution of land by using excessive fertilizers, pesticides as well as
soil
erosion.
For example
, people use
huge amount
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huge amounts
of insecticides and pesticides for the high yield of
crops but
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crops, but
inreturn
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in return
it degrades the quality of
soil
resulting in low
production
.
Moreover
, the cutting down of trees to expand agricultural land increases the vulnerability of
removint
remove something concrete, as by lifting, pushing, or taking off, or remove something abstract
removing
fertile top
soil which
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soil, which
may cause
soil
erosion as well as drought. Inn other hands, various countries
on
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in
of
the world lacks the proper irrigation facilities,
as a result
insufficient
production
causing hunger and starvation.
for
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For
instance, the country like Nepal lacks the proper irrigation facilities in its
mountaineous
having hills and crags
mountainous
mountains
monotonous
region so
,
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,
the people have to depend upon the monsoon rain which does not favour
everytime
and the agricultural outcome in
this
region is almost negligible. The emphasises should be given in using organic fertilizers rather than chemical fertilizers.The use of organic herbicides does not only increases the fertility of
soil but
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soil, but
also
helps in high
production
of crops.It does not even degrade the
environment
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environment, instead
instead
it helps to maintain balance in
eco system
a system formed by the interaction of a community of organisms with their physical environment
ecosystem
. The other solution can be the proper irrigation facilities in
mountaineous
having hills and crags
mountainous
mountains
and rocky landscapes.To illustrate,
instead
of depending on natural rain farmers should have the provision of building water storing dams, canals and channels to distribute water to agricultural fields. In conclusion, for high yielding of agricultural products the excessive use of inorganic fertilizers should be discarded and priorities should be given in using organic fertilizers.Conservation of environmental factors plays an important role in promoting agriculture.
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