Some people think that young people should follow older people’s examples while others think it is good for young people to challenge older people’s opinions and thoughts. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is a view of many people that
youngster
should consider the experiences of their seniors, while some others deem that everyone should develop their own identical methods for better understanding.
On the one hand, Sole-efforts in learning something might often lead to better understanding with higher levels of output and service. Suggestion
youngsters
the youngster
a youngster
Furthermore
, the thinking skills of minors will hopefully be improved because they are independently finding
solutions to their problems. Suggestion
have independently found
For example
, summer camps
activities are predominant in Suggestion
camp
childrens’
future Suggestion
Childrens’
children
endavours
. a purposeful or industrious undertaking (especially one that requires effort or boldness)
endeavours
endeavour
Consequently
, taking bad decision or mistakes often allow individuals to learn the consequences, which would not be possible by teaching in some cases. Considering the founder of Microsoft, Bill Gates whose
success is the outcome of his efforts, there was no one to mentor him for the decisions he applied.
Accept comma addition
Gates, whose
On the other hand
, influence of elderly people is important, especially at their growing age. Therefore
, children should consider established
Suggestion
establishing
groud
-rules and advices proposed by their guardians, as the solid part of the earth's surface
ground
this
allows allows youngters
to absorb conventions and codes of conduct, hopefully leading to an absence of problems a young person of either sex
youngsters
such
as bullying, truancy and delinquency later on. In addition
to that, adequate conselling
should reduce the risk of children falling victim to crimes something that provides direction or advice as to a decision or course of action
counselling
such
as abduction or coming under the influence of negative peer pressure.
In conclusion, while there are benefits to leave children to learn on their own and set their own examples, the possible consequences are still unknown. Children should consider old-fashioned techniques, as are being followed by their ancestors.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!