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Nowadays people spend less and less time at home. What are the causes and what are the effects on the individual and the society

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In recent times, many people have spent much
time
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 in their homes. There are several predisposing factors responsible for these occurrences,
such
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 as economic hardship, tight
work
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 schedules among others. These effects
also
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 have implications for the health of the individual and society. The
first
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 reason I think people do not spend quality
time
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 with their loved ones could be because of the economic crisis of the country. People engage in different activities in other to provide the basic amenities for their immediate and extended family. They use most of their
time
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 either on the streets or at their place of
work
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. Another reason to consider is the
work
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 schedule of most parents. Many adults working in the private sector spend an average of nine to ten hours
at
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in
 the workplace.
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, bankers resume their
duty
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duties
 by 7.00am and close by 5.00pm. Even after the official closing
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, they stay back to make sure that the account for the daily transactions get balanced. More so, these individuals get to relax only on weekends if management
do not call
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does not call
 them upon to reconcile their accounts. Because of
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, they hardly bond with their family at home.
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, the resultant consequences of these actions affect the health of people in several ways
.
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.
 People break down because of accumulated stress, and in worse
cases they
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cases, they
 might even slump and lose their lives.
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, studies have shown that 45 to 55 percent of people do not go for routine medical checkups because of limited
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 and tight
work
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 schedules.
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, most people do not find
time
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 to bond with their spouse and children. These individuals become socially estranged from society. They become loners and alienated from the social world because of their nature. In conclusion, the outcome of spending less
time
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 with immediate family significantly affects individuals and the society.
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