The development of tourism contributes to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to have one language in the world and give your opinion?

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tourism industry

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the tourism industry

is gaining more attention, according to some English

language

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will become the only verbal communicative way around the world. While single spoken

language

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can damage other cultures massively,

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believe that it will bring more financial gains by making interaction easy.   The main drawback of English becoming single interactive

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is that it will harm other cultures.

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is because, people will no longer have the interest to practice their own

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rather than English.

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, they will lose contact with their native culture and will lose connection with their heritage. In

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process they

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process, they

suffer from identity

crisis which

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crisis, which

will massively hurt their art and film industry.

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, one

communication

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communication, language

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will lead to easy access to different countries and can lead to massive financial gain. Having one communication method will make

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the interaction

much easier. In

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era of globalization if a country

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wants

to improve their business, they must need to interact with other country effectively.

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is because, the underdeveloped and developing countries are earning revenues through exporting goods to developed countries.

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, the GDP growth of Bangladesh was 7% in 2019 due to the fact that they have exported a massive amount of garments to Canada and

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become possible as they introduced English as a

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language

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in their country.

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is a clear indication

that how same

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how that same

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can contribute

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countries

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country's

economy.   In conclusion,

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one

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can harm a

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nation's

culture,

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believe that it brings

much

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many

financial advantages which can lead to prosperity.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 5.5

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The development of tourism contributes to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to have one language in the world and give your opinion?

Fully explain your ideas

A lot of money is spent nowadays searching for oil. As the world's oil resources will eventually run out, it would be more logical to spend some of this money on developing new sources of power, such as wind and solar. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Instead of revealing the truth, the mass media very often misguides people. What are the reasons behind this and the visible effects on the society at large?

Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

The best way to make roads safer is to make vehicle drivers take a driving test each year.