Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, it creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

These days, tourists from different states are visiting other

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, and international travel has now become a mega-industry. It is argued that

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has created problems

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of an understanding between citizens of different nations.

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essay fully disagrees with

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argument and believes that

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has boosted people’s

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because it provides employment for the locals and improves bilateral ties by bridging the gap in the difference of opinion.

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, international

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improves the job prospects of a country and it helps in creating

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between different states.

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to say, when people visit a specific destination, they purchase goods, stay in a hotel and

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tourist sites, and to

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more tourists

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more employees are required,

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job opportunities are boosted.

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, it was reported by one of Mexico’s newspapers, that after US

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tourism

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in Mexico increased the unemployment in the country dramatically reduced and locals started appreciating

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visitor surge.

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,

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has an enormous positive impact on bilateral ties between nations. When people travel to

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, they tend to respect the difference of opinion of their hosts and

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massively bridges the gap of cultural

difference

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,

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, in turn, enhances the diplomatic relation between them.

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situation has been widely observed among those

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in the past has shared hostile relation towards each other, and

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has acted as an ambassador to curb

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relations

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,

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, a report published by the government of South Korea stated that

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diplomatic ties with North Korea has substantially increased after over the

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2 years when the

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among them was opened after a decade ban. In conclusion, I believe that

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has created an understanding between various

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and cultures and

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has surged

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employments

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employment

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for the local and have dramatically improved

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bilateral

relations

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.