Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, it creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

These days, tourists from different states are visiting other

countries

, and international travel has now become a mega-industry. It is argued that

this

has created problems

instead

of an understanding between citizens of different nations.

This

essay fully disagrees with

this

argument and believes that

tourism

has boosted people’s

relations

because it provides employment for the locals and improves bilateral ties by bridging the gap in the difference of opinion.

Firstly

, international

tourism

improves the job prospects of a country and it helps in creating

relations

between different states.

That is

to say, when people visit a specific destination, they purchase goods, stay in a hotel and

visiting

Wrong verb form

visit

show examples

tourist sites, and to

accommodates

Wrong verb form

accommodate

show examples

more tourists

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

more employees are required,

hence

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

job opportunities are boosted.

For example

, it was reported by one of Mexico’s newspapers, that after US

Change noun form

citizen

show examples

citizen’s

Change noun form

citizen

show examples

tourism

in Mexico increased the unemployment in the country dramatically reduced and locals started appreciating

this

visitor surge.

Secondly

,

tourism

has an enormous positive impact on bilateral ties between nations. When people travel to

countries

, they tend to respect the difference of opinion of their hosts and

this

massively bridges the gap of cultural

difference

Fix the agreement mistake

differences

show examples

,

this

, in turn, enhances the diplomatic relation between them.

This

situation has been widely observed among those

countries

who

Correct pronoun usage

that

show examples

in the past has shared hostile relation towards each other, and

tourism

has acted as an ambassador to curb

tensed

Replace the word

tense

show examples

relations

,

For instance

, a report published by the government of South Korea stated that

country’s

Correct article usage

the country’s

show examples

diplomatic ties with North Korea has substantially increased after over the

last

2 years when the

tourism

among them was opened after a decade ban. In conclusion, I believe that

tourism

has created an understanding between various

countries

and cultures and

this

has surged

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

employments

Fix the agreement mistake

employment

show examples

for the local and have dramatically improved

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

bilateral

relations

.