You are a student at a language school in New Zealand studying Business English. Part of the course is a summer work placement programme. Unfortunately, you have just learnt from the school that this programme has now been cancelled. Write a letter to the School Principal. In your letter: state your reason for writing describe the problem and your concerns explain what you would like the Principal to do.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am Kevin Jonas studying Business English at your school

from

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year

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letter under concern regarding the summer work placement programme, which has been cancelled for

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year

. I was astonished when I heard

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information and I am really worried

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my future. I was really dependant upon

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summer work placement as I have taken

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for my studies and I have to pay

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of it by the coming

two years. Now, I am really concerned about paying my debts as

this

year

summer placement is cancelled by the institution.

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, I am not from

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wealthy family background, so I have to take care of my younger siblings as well

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because my father got retired

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year

from his job. Now, I not only have

responsibility

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my siblings, but I have to take care

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needs of my parents

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. I request you to please consider my problems and through your contacts let me know about any job I can do so that I can take care of my family. Looking forward

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your prompt response. Your's faithfully, Kevin Jonas

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secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

195 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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