You are a student at a language school in New Zealand studying Business English. Part of the course is a summer work placement programme. Unfortunately, you have just learnt from the school that this programme has now been cancelled. Write a letter to the School Principal. In your letter: state your reason for writing describe the problem and your concerns explain what you would like the Principal to do.
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Kevin Jonas studying Business English at your school
from
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for
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the past
year
. I am writing this
letter under concern regarding the summer work placement programme, which has been cancelled for this
year
. I was astonished when I heard this
information and I am really worried for
my future.
I was really dependant upon Change preposition
about
this
summer work placement as I have taken loan
for my studies and I have to pay Correct article usage
a loan
bank
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the bank
all
of it by the coming Change preposition
for all
next
two years. Now, I am really concerned about paying my debts as this
year
summer placement is cancelled by the institution. Also
, I am not from a
wealthy family background, so I have to take care of my younger siblings as wellRemove the article
apply
,
because my father got retired Remove the comma
apply
this
year
from his job. Now, I not only have responsibility
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the responsibility
of
my siblings, but I have to take care Change preposition
for
the
needs of my parents Change preposition
of the
also
.
I request you to please consider my problems and through your contacts let me know about any job I can do so that I can take care of my family.
Looking forward for
your prompt response.
Your's faithfully,
Kevin JonasChange the preposition
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite