In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?
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one
shop to another to meet their daily requirements, but with the growing technology and infrastructure, all the requirements are consolidated
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For example
, they don't get all the household stuff from one
shop, for which they have to keep looking for products from one
store to another which is time
taking and frustrating. On the other
hand there
are parking issues, as the streets are narrow and crowded.
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However
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next
door, but this
doesn't provide enough evidence for negative development
.
On the contrary
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roof, from shopping to other activities such
as gaming zones for kids and multiplex to spend quality time
with family members. for
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with the family members. To compensate parents along with thier
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, Malls also
provide locals with variety
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a variety
also
have great discounts to attract the audience which the local shops fail to deliver. On the other hand
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