Some people think that governments should change the way individuals live, while others believe they should choose the way themselves. Discuss these both points of view and give your opinion?

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Children from a rich family background do not deal well with the hardships in
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in comparison with those who have a mediocre family background during their childhood days. I completely agree with
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idea and opinion because the children from a poor family have good
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skill and
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have a better emotional quotient in
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these children with less
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tend to be happy with what they have at present and so do not expect a lot from their parents.
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, they do not live in a big house or a mansion with separate
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rooms, but
live in a small hut
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Despite of these poor facilities they live happily with their family without complaining about them.
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, the children without a
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travel mostly by bicycle and public transports from their childhood, so they would not find it difficult to travel in their
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compared to the wealthy children. The
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important reason for me to agree with
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opinion is that they are better with
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management
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and
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management
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skills. These children help their parents to overcome the financial burden by doing local errands for
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which help them to manage
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in
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, perhaps during their childhood days they help their parents with the household work
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after they are finished with school.
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, middle class children tend to work part
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in their neighbourhoods to help their family financially. In conclusion
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children with a middle class background have better
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skills which are crucial for facing
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.Unlike the children with wealthy parents
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they have a better emotional stability to deal with the problems of adulthood.
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