For all children, the ability to play a musical instrument is just as important as the ability to read and write.’ How far do you agree with this suggestion? How important is it for a child to learn to play a musical instrument, in your view?

The question of which skills to prioritise for a child’s early education is important for all parents and educators, and
music
can certainly claim to be a key possibility when deciding which abilities to teach.
However
, I feel that playing
music
is actually less important than basic
literacy
, and I will explain the reasons here.
Firstly
, it seems simplistic to say that
music
is paramount ‘for all children.’ Certainly, there are some children who are highly talented or have great interest in
music
, and when we think of childhood prodigies
such
as Beethoven or Yehudi Menuhin we see how
this
talent can be brought out.
However
,
such
talents are rare, and even the enjoyment and cultural values to be gained from learning
music
cannot genuinely be compared to the benefits of becoming literate.
Secondly
, it is a fact that
literacy
is a guarantee of academic progress and the absorption of information, while playing
music
does not offer
this
security.
For example
, it would be unimaginable to transmit scientific or mathematical information to children via the medium of
music
.
Finally
, it is surely wiser to regard
music
as one of a wide range of secondary skills, ranking below
literacy
and sitting alongside sports, hobbies, foreign languages and other important but less essential activities. Of course, those who say that highly talented
children
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child
must be allowed to develop their talents are quite correct; it is equally true, though, that few children seem to possess
musical ability
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the musical ability
a musical ability
to the extent that it should be prioritised so highly for all pupils. In conclusion, I would not wish to underestimate the potential benefits of learning to play
music
for a minority of children, and it should certainly be available as an option.
However
, if we think of all children in a given community,
literacy
appears to be a far stronger pathway to progress and independence.
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