The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent you agree or disagree?

Owing to the increasing population of the

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overweight, causing

a burden on the hospital management system, some people consider that introducing more physical-oriented course in the school curriculum will be an ideal manner to tackle

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tendency. In my opinion, I agree with

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approach based on the benefits of early development in

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awareness. In the following essay, two major advantages will be discussed in order to address

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issue.

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and foremost, various kinds of sport activities

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as

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and tennis can be implemented as a part of school education program,

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intrigue the interest of students in the early phase of development. In

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way, overweight students will be more active and motivated by learning in which they are interested. From my personal experience, as a stressful student whose

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condition is worsening, the

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course gives me a breather within the heavy course load. Not only do I relieving fatigue through the exercise, but

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exercise arouses my interest of

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, and I cultivate the habit of playing

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once a week.

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,

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entertainment factor, the tests and training will come along with the curriculum. Even though

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exercise as a pure interest, due to the introduction of the aforementioned grading system, will be transferred into pressure from the responsibility of passing through the exam, but the daily training can boost the fundamental physical ability and the

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consciousness.

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, parents can involve themselves

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sport activities in order to cope with the tasks with their obese child.

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, the

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consciousness will be developed

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widely spread through the public. In conclusion, I agree that introducing the

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courses can be beneficial in either active or passive way to handle the

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number of

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-related problems. The

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awareness can be strengthened through the diversification of physical education and the parent- child cooperation,

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leading to the well-being and

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lifestyle of citizens.