In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both sides and express your opinion.

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In various
part
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parts
of the world, some people are in favour to have significantly higher incomes as it is beneficial for the government, while others deem that income should be decided by the law so that no one earn more or less than he/she deserved. On the one hand, earning a good amount of money might be beneficial for the human society and the government.
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, the higher the earnings, the more they would contribute in terms of taxes and donations and it will encourage
government
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the government
governments
to provide better funding for infrastructure, transport and healthcare benefits.
For example
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, Bill Gates, on of the top wealthiest persons in the world contributes as a
philantropist
someone who makes charitable donations intended to increase human well-being
philanthropist
.
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, it by no means clear that every country impose
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kind of income tax or every person is honest with their fellow citizens.
On the other hand
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, there are professions which are entitled as the core components as they contribute their efforts, time and sometimes their lives.
For example
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, teachers, policemen and soldiers are
ususally
under normal conditions
usually
not paid enough because of no system to define
payscale
involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit
physical
.
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, actors and
sportspersons
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are paid with higher
salaries which
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salaries, which
is not favourable
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to
the people who are contributing more as compared to media celebrities. So the
payscale
involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit
physical
pay scale
needs to be defined by the state or any authorized institution so that the salary would not be compromised and everyone earn what that individual is accounted for. In conclusion, while there are benefits of good earning, the lack of
measuability
the quality of moving freely
mobility
is a substantial drawback. Having a defined slab of salaries seems to be beneficial for the countries and their citizens.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • wealth inequality
  • economic growth
  • motivation
  • talent acquisition
  • consumer spending
  • tax revenue
  • redistributing wealth
  • market forces
  • income disparity
  • social stability
  • freedom of choice
  • meritocracy
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