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It is better to have one true friend than all the acquaintances in the world. Do you agree or disagree with this statement

#friend #acquaintances #world
The benefits of having a supportive partner surpasses that of many associates in
one
's life. I quite agree that
one
 loyal colleague gives the needed motivation and understanding than a good number of contacts. The support to push through life is essential to our survival. A good friend will always find the best words and actions to encourage and ensure we succeed together.
This
 assistance may be in terms of finance, advice, career, for family or education.
For example
, someone who provides help to learning a trade, and at the same time serves as guarantor for him while undergoing the training. Meanwhile, the ally is
also
 there to ensure after completion of the training, he was able to start and stand on his own. Everyone needs a sincere and trustworthy companion to share thoughts and views with. An intimate close confidant who has a listening ear and always
one
 run to a person
,
Accept space
,
he/she will keep what's secret, provide necessary and needed help, at the same time stand with his/her alter ego through thick and thin. An ally who can shield a colleague from embarrassment, debt, cloth or shelter him/her for a while. Someone who does not expose the affairs of the person.
For instance
, seeking an advice on seeking for a new job, career change, immigration or
further
 studies can only be shared with a true friend. In conclusion, having a close confidant in many ways outweighs walking with a good number of acquaintances in
this
 life and I strongly agree that the role just
one
 companion plays is unmatched by the thousands of other associates.

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