In recent years, there has been a considerable rise in crimes committed by young people in cities. what has caused this ? what solutions can you suggest ?

Today’s era, indeed the ratio of crimes rapidly increased in urban areas among young people. Many people frequently move towards criminal act because they face several issues regarding jobs, and uncontrollable rise in prices.
Such
kind of offence impacted
in
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on
their lives. There are uncountable reasons to rise in crime ratio.
Firstly
, the unemployment rate is higher day by day. In many countries the passing tendency of graduates increased but unfortunately they do not find any opportunity in the market for income.
Consequently
the young generation starts doing crime.
For instance
, Mostly the street evils are very famous in the urban areas. As per recent research published in
New York Times
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the New York Times
the offence is much higher ten times as compared to
last
years.
Secondly
, the other major reason is inflation. In underdevelopment cities the prices
is exceed
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have exceeded
are exceeding
beyond the limits.
As a result
poor people couldn’t able to full fill the desires and needs.
However they
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However, they
start comparing with others and try to achieve the targets in other evil way.
For Example
, in Japan the prices of commodities have rapidly increased and side by side the medical facilities
also
uncontrollable. There are different solutions to control the unlawful things
.
Accept space
.
Therefore
, the Government should arrange jobs for students in their respective fields.
Additionally
, in the urban
cities universities
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cities, universities
city's universities
city's city's universities
city universities
cities' universities
must offer scholarship programs for those students who couldn’t afford the university fees.
Furthermore
, to control the unbeatable inflation rate the Government imposes some taxes and utilizes these taxes to support the deprived people. I summarize here, so these preventative measures easily overcome the crime ratio in the cities among the young people.

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