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BULLYING BEHAVIOR HAS BECOME A MAJOR PRLEM AT SCHOOLS. WHAT ARE THE CAUSES AND SOLUTIONS TO THE PROBLEM?

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It is irrefutable that
adolescenes
the time period between the beginning of puberty and adulthood
adolescence
adolescents
 nowadays tries to follow what they see
in
Suggestion
on
 the television and in elders. Bullying is no doubt a burgeoning issue in many nations currently and
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 results are not
virtous
morally excellent
virtuous
virtues
. I shall put forth my arguments discussing the causes and its solutions.
To begin
 with, we have become a consumerist society, and for
this
 parents work for longer hours in order to maintain a healthy lifestyle. Kids live in a nuclear family, so no
graparents
 are around them to teach children a basic lesson of life.
Moreover
, most of the pupils
tries
Suggestion
try
 to follow the western culture,
consequently
 they become what they witness in programs.
Furthermore
, children do not get adequate guidance from their elders, and they become tensed and rude.
Likewise
, teenagers are not complacent. They try to do things which
helps
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help
 them to combat their current situation.
Similarly
, these see the younger kid as a weak, so they try to rule among them. The one who does not follow their rules becomes a victim of bullying. Solutions to
this
 are simple. Parents should spend a significant time with
thier
of them or themselves
their
 kids and teach them a lesson of respect and dignity. It is
also
 an onus
of
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on
school
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schools
 to deliver lectures regarding demerits of bullying and its consequences. Government should
also
 need to step forward with strict rules and laws in order to disintegrate bullying. To sum up, bullying is increasing as
result
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a result
the result
 of absence of parents from home as they have become workaholics. Father and mother needs to spend a quality time with their kids, as well as
school
Suggestion
schools
 should
also
 play an indispensable role in
this
 situation.
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