Write a letter to a company asking for a refund for something you bought from them online. In your letter include: what you bought what the problem is why you want a refund

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Dear Sir/Madam, Recently I made a purchase from your website and I am writing

this

letter to get refunded for it. One week before, on 21st November 2019, my old

laptop

slipped into the pool which resulted in it being damaged

therefore

I immediately placed a new

laptop

's order from your

webstore

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website

www.ipad.com with HP502 model for my immediate office, after eagerly waiting for its arrival for 6 days, I was highly disappointed as the

laptop

was physically damaged.

This

might be possibly due to the logistic issue where it has been

misappropriately

Correct your spelling

misappropriated

handled by the

personel

Correct your spelling

person

personnel

. As

this

laptop

was supposed to be for my office use and

this

exchange process might take longer time

Add the comma(s)

, therefore,

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therefore

I have decided to buy it locally from the HP franchise which would be more costly than purchasing online

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, therefore,

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therefore

I would require the refund for my

laptop

as the replacement is no longer required by me. I look forward to hearing back from you. Yours Faithfully, Vivek Kumar.

Submitted by MK on Wed Nov 27 2019

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

166 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to a company asking for a refund for something you bought from them online. In your letter include: what you bought what the problem is why you want a refund

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

Some people believe that it is a good idea that old people continue to work if it is possible for them to do so Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important. Discuss both views

Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The picture below shows the recycling process of wasted glass bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words