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or
organization
to find their
target
customers and they are able to earn decent
income
all by themselves. No
doubt
that an increasing
number
of people start to
work
for themselves.
Nevertheless
, being self-employed
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also has
some negative
impact
on individuals and the whole
society
. From personal perspectives, becoming self-employed means that people need to take
responsibility
for themselves. As for those who are not self-disciplined enough or lacking in
time-management
skills, being a
freelancer
could lead to low
efficiency
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anxiety
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people in general
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life
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is
more likely to suffer from
isolation
and
loneliness
. On the societal
level
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popularity
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self-employment
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threat
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of people are attracted by the benefits of
self-employment
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also
has some negative impacts on individuals and the
society
. In recent years, it has become far more common for people to be self-employed,
instead
of working for a
corporation
. From my
point
of
view
, there are various explanations for the
phenomenon
and working for ourselves could have certain drawbacks. Several causes a
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have contributed
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are contributing
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to the
rise
of
self-employment
. For starters, many people choosing to
work
for themselves are attracted by the benefits of flexible working hours as well as
freedom
of
creation
. Which means that they
don’t
need to
punch
in and out everyday and less restrictions are imposed on their
work
. That’s probably the
reason
why
self-employment
is especially popular among writers, designers and artists whose jobs require creative thinking rather than rules and regulations.
In
addition
,
internet
development
also
makes freelance available for b
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internet
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role
in connecting people who are in need of certain services with those who can satisfy their requirements. With the
help
of
internet
, people no longer need to rely on a
company
or
organization
to find their
target
customers and they are able to earn decent
income
all by themselves. No
doubt
that an increasing
number
of people start to
work
for themselves.
Nevertheless
, being self-employed
a
lso have
Suggestion
also has
some negative
impact
on individuals and the whole
society
. From personal perspectives, becoming self-employed means that people need to take
responsibility
for themselves. As for those who are not self-disciplined enough or lacking in
time-management
skills, being a
freelancer
could lead to low
efficiency
and
anxiety
. They might find t
hem
people in general
they
accomplish nothing and lose
control
of their own
life
.
Furthermore
, compared with those who working in a
company
, self-employed
group
a
re
Suggestion
is
more likely to suffer from
isolation
and
loneliness
. On the societal
level
, the
popularity
of
self-employment
could pose a
threat
to the current
tax
system
or the
l
abor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
laws, which may
cause
some chaos among
society
. In a
word
, even though g
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a growing number
the growing number
number
of people are attracted by the benefits of
self-employment
, it
also
has some negative impacts on individuals and the
society
. In recent years, it has become far more common for people to be self-employed,
instead
of working for a
corporation
. From my
point
of
view
, there are various explanations for the
phenomenon
and working for ourselves could have certain drawbacks. Several causes a
re contributed
Suggestion
have contributed
are contributing
contribute
to the
rise
of
self-employment
. For starters, many people choosing to
work
for themselves are attracted by the benefits of flexible working hours as well as
freedom
of
creation
. Which means that they
don’t
need to
punch
in and out everyday and less restrictions are imposed on their
work
. That’s probably the
reason
why
self-employment
is especially popular among writers, designers and artists whose jobs require creative thinking rather than rules and regulations.
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internet
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help
of
internet
, people no longer need to rely on a
company
or
organization
to find their
target
customers and they are able to earn decent
income
all by themselves. No
doubt
that an increasing
number
of people start to
work
for themselves.
Nevertheless
, being self-employed
a
lso have
Suggestion
also has
some negative
impact
on individuals and the whole
society
. From personal perspectives, becoming self-employed means that people need to take
responsibility
for themselves. As for those who are not self-disciplined enough or lacking in
time-management
skills, being a
freelancer
could lead to low
efficiency
and
anxiety
. They might find t
hem
people in general
they
accomplish nothing and lose
control
of their own
life
.
Furthermore
, compared with those who working in a
company
, self-employed
group
a
re
Suggestion
is
more likely to suffer from
isolation
and
loneliness
. On the societal
level
, the
popularity
of
self-employment
could pose a
threat
to the current
tax
system
or the
l
abor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
laws, which may
cause
some chaos among
society
. In a
word
, even though g
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Suggestion
a growing number
the growing number
number
of people are attracted by the benefits of
self-employment
, it
also
has some negative impacts on individuals and the
society
. In recent years, it has become far more common for people to be self-employed,
instead
of working for a
corporation
. From my
point
of
view
, there are various explanations for the
phenomenon
and working for ourselves could have certain drawbacks. Several causes a
re contributed
Suggestion
have contributed
are contributing
contribute
to the
rise
of
self-employment
. For starters, many people choosing to
work
for themselves are attracted by the benefits of flexible working hours as well as
freedom
of
creation
. Which means that they
don’t
need to
punch
in and out everyday and less restrictions are imposed on their
work
. That’s probably the
reason
why
self-employment
is especially popular among writers, designers and artists whose jobs require creative thinking rather than rules and regulations.
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addition
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internet
development
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company
or
organization
to find their
target
customers and they are able to earn decent
income
all by themselves. No
doubt
that an increasing
number
of people start to
work
for themselves.
Nevertheless
, being self-employed
a
lso have
Suggestion
also has
some negative
impact
on individuals and the whole
society
. From personal perspectives, becoming self-employed means that people need to take
responsibility
for themselves. As for those who are not self-disciplined enough or lacking in
time-management
skills, being a
freelancer
could lead to low
efficiency
and
anxiety
. They might find t
hem
people in general
they
accomplish nothing and lose
control
of their own
life
.
Furthermore
, compared with those who working in a
company
, self-employed
group
a
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is
more likely to suffer from
isolation
and
loneliness
. On the societal
level
, the
popularity
of
self-employment
could pose a
threat
to the current
tax
system
or the
l
abor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
laws, which may
cause
some chaos among
society
. In a
word
, even though g
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a growing number
the growing number
number
of people are attracted by the benefits of
self-employment
, it
also
has some negative impacts on individuals and the
society
. In recent years, it has become far more common for people to be self-employed,
instead
of working for a
corporation
. From my
point
of
view
, there are various explanations for the
phenomenon
and working for ourselves could have certain drawbacks. Several causes a
re contributed
Suggestion
have contributed
are contributing
contribute
to the
rise
of
self-employment
. For starters, many people choosing to
work
for themselves are attracted by the benefits of flexible working hours as well as
freedom
of
creation
. Which means that they
don’t
need to
punch
in and out everyday and less restrictions are imposed on their
work
. That’s probably the
reason
why
self-employment
is especially popular among writers, designers and artists whose jobs require creative thinking rather than rules and regulations.
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addition
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internet
development
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, people no longer need to rely on a
company
or
organization
to find their
target
customers and they are able to earn decent
income
all by themselves. No
doubt
that an increasing
number
of people start to
work
for themselves.
Nevertheless
, being self-employed
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also has
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some negative
impact
on individuals and the whole
society
. From personal perspectives, becoming self-employed means that people need to take
responsibility
for themselves. As for those who are not self-disciplined enough or lacking in
time-management
skills, being a
freelancer
could lead to low
efficiency
and
anxiety
. They might find t
hem
people in general
they
accomplish nothing and lose
control
of their own
life
.
Furthermore
, compared with those who working in a
company
, self-employed
group
a
re
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is
more likely to suffer from
isolation
and
loneliness
. On the societal
level
, the
popularity
of
self-employment
could pose a
threat
to the current
tax
system
or the
l
abor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
laws, which may
cause
some chaos among
society
. In a
word
, even though g
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a growing number
the growing number
number
of people are attracted by the benefits of
self-employment
, it
also
has some negative impacts on individuals and the
society
. In recent years, it has become far more common for people to be self-employed,
instead
of working for a
corporation
. From my
point
of
view
, there are various explanations for the
phenomenon
and working for ourselves could have certain drawbacks. Several causes a
re contributed
Suggestion
have contributed
are contributing
contribute
to the
rise
of
self-employment
. For starters, many people choosing to
work
for themselves are attracted by the benefits of flexible working hours as well as
freedom
of
creation
. Which means that they
don’t
need to
punch
in and out everyday and less restrictions are imposed on their
work
. That’s probably the
reason
why
self-employment
is especially popular among writers, designers and artists whose jobs require creative thinking rather than rules and regulations.
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addition
,
internet
development
also
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a broader group
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role
in connecting people who are in need of certain services with those who can satisfy their requirements. With the
help
of
internet
, people no longer need to rely on a
company
or
organization
to find their
target
customers and they are able to earn decent
income
all by themselves. No
doubt
that an increasing
number
of people start to
work
for themselves.
Nevertheless
, being self-employed
a
lso have
Suggestion
also has
some negative
impact
on individuals and the whole
society
. From personal perspectives, becoming self-employed means that people need to take
responsibility
for themselves. As for those who are not self-disciplined enough or lacking in
time-management
skills, being a
freelancer
could lead to low
efficiency
and
anxiety
. They might find t
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life
.
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, compared with those who working in a
company
, self-employed
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is
more likely to suffer from
isolation
and
loneliness
. On the societal
level
, the
popularity
of
self-employment
could pose a
threat
to the current
tax
system
or the
l
abor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
laws, which may
cause
some chaos among
society
. In a
word
, even though g
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a growing number
the growing number
number
of people are attracted by the benefits of
self-employment
, it
also
has some negative impacts on individuals and the
society
. In recent years, it has become far more common for people to be self-employed,
instead
of working for a
corporation
. From my
point
of
view
, there are various explanations for the
phenomenon
and working for ourselves could have certain drawbacks. Several causes a
re contributed
Suggestion
have contributed
are contributing
contribute
to the
rise
of
self-employment
. For starters, many people choosing to
work
for themselves are attracted by the benefits of flexible working hours as well as
freedom
of
creation
. Which means that they
don’t
need to
punch
in and out everyday and less restrictions are imposed on their
work
. That’s probably the
reason
why
self-employment
is especially popular among writers, designers and artists whose jobs require creative thinking rather than rules and regulations.
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addition
,
internet
development
also
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a broader group
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in connecting people who are in need of certain services with those who can satisfy their requirements. With the
help
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, people no longer need to rely on a
company
or
organization
to find their
target
customers and they are able to earn decent
income
all by themselves. No
doubt
that an increasing
number
of people start to
work
for themselves.
Nevertheless
, being self-employed
a
lso have
Suggestion
also has
some negative
impact
on individuals and the whole
society
. From personal perspectives, becoming self-employed means that people need to take
responsibility
for themselves. As for those who are not self-disciplined enough or lacking in
time-management
skills, being a
freelancer
could lead to low
efficiency
and
anxiety
. They might find t
hem
people in general
they
accomplish nothing and lose
control
of their own
life
.
Furthermore
, compared with those who working in a
company
, self-employed
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more likely to suffer from
isolation
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loneliness
. On the societal
level
, the
popularity
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self-employment
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threat
to the current
tax
system
or the
l
abor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
laws, which may
cause
some chaos among
society
. In a
word
, even though g
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a growing number
the growing number
number
of people are attracted by the benefits of
self-employment
, it
also
has some negative impacts on individuals and the
society
. In recent years, it has become far more common for people to be self-employed,
instead
of working for a
corporation
. From my
point
of
view
, there are various explanations for the
phenomenon
and working for ourselves could have certain drawbacks. Several causes a
re contributed
Suggestion
have contributed
are contributing
contribute
to the
rise
of
self-employment
. For starters, many people choosing to
work
for themselves are attracted by the benefits of flexible working hours as well as
freedom
of
creation
. Which means that they
don’t
need to
punch
in and out everyday and less restrictions are imposed on their
work
. That’s probably the
reason
why
self-employment
is especially popular among writers, designers and artists whose jobs require creative thinking rather than rules and regulations.
In
addition
,
internet
development
also
makes freelance available for b
roader
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a broader group
group
of people. N
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internet
plays a vital
role
in connecting people who are in need of certain services with those who can satisfy their requirements. With the
help
of
internet
, people no longer need to rely on a
company
or
organization
to find their
target
customers and they are able to earn decent
income
all by themselves. No
doubt
that an increasing
number
of people start to
work
for themselves.
Nevertheless
, being self-employed
a
lso have
Suggestion
also has
some negative
impact
on individuals and the whole
society
. From personal perspectives, becoming self-employed means that people need to take
responsibility
for themselves. As for those who are not self-disciplined enough or lacking in
time-management
skills, being a
freelancer
could lead to low
efficiency
and
anxiety
. They might find t
hem
people in general
they
accomplish nothing and lose
control
of their own
life
.
Furthermore
, compared with those who working in a
company
, self-employed
group
a
re
Suggestion
is
more likely to suffer from
isolation
and
loneliness
. On the societal
level
, the
popularity
of
self-employment
could pose a
threat
to the current
tax
system
or the l
aborr
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
laws, which may
cause
some chaos among
society
. In a
word
, even though g
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a growing number
the growing number
number
of people are attracted by the benefits of
self-employment
, it
also
has some negative impacts on individuals and the
society
. In recent years, it has become far more common for people to be self-employed,
instead
of working for a
corporation
. From my
point
of
view
, there are various explanations for the
phenomenon
and working for ourselves could have certain drawbacks. Several causes a
re contributed
Suggestion
have contributed
are contributing
contribute
to the
rise
of
self-employment
. For starters, many people choosing to
work
for themselves are attracted by the benefits of flexible working hours as well as
freedom
of
creation
. Which means that they
don’t
need to
punch
in and out everyday and less restrictions are imposed on their
work
. That’s probably the
reason
why
self-employment
is especially popular among writers, designers and artists whose jobs require creative thinking rather than rules and regulations.
In
addition
,
internet
development
also
makes freelance available for b
roader
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a broader group
group
of people. N
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internet
plays a vital
role
in connecting people who are in need of certain services with those who can satisfy their requirements. With the
help
of
internet
, people no longer need to rely on a
company
or
organization
to find their
target
customers and they are able to earn decent
income
all by themselves. No
doubt
that an increasing
number
of people start to
work
for themselves.
Nevertheless
, being self-employed
a
lso have
Suggestion
also has
some negative
impact
on individuals and the whole
society
. From personal perspectives, becoming self-employed means that people need to take
responsibility
for themselves. As for those who are not self-disciplined enough or lacking in
time-management
skills, being a
freelancer
could lead to low
efficiency
and
anxiety
. They might find t
hem
people in general
they
accomplish nothing and lose
control
of their own
life
.
Furthermore
, compared with those who working in a
company
, self-employed
group
a
re
Suggestion
is
more likely to suffer from
isolation
and
loneliness
. On the societal
level
, the
popularity
of
self-employment
could pose a
threat
to the current
tax
system
or the
l
abor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
laws, which may
cause
some chaos among
society
. In a
word
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self-employment
, it
also
has some negative impacts on individuals and the
society
. In recent years, it has become far more common for people to be self-employed,
instead
of working for a
corporation
. From my
point
of
view
, there are various explanations for the
phenomenon
and working for ourselves could have certain drawbacks. Several causes a
re contributed
Suggestion
have contributed
are contributing
contribute
to the
rise
of
self-employment
. For starters, many people choosing to
work
for themselves are attracted by the benefits of flexible working hours as well as
freedom
of
creation
. Which means that they
don’t
need to
punch
in and out everyday and less restrictions are imposed on their
work
. That’s probably the
reason
why
self-employment
is especially popular among writers, designers and artists whose jobs require creative thinking rather than rules and regulations.
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addition
,
internet
development
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in connecting people who are in need of certain services with those who can satisfy their requirements. With the
help
of
internet
, people no longer need to rely on a
company
or
organization
to find their
target
customers and they are able to earn decent
income
all by themselves. No
doubt
that an increasing
number
of people start to
work
for themselves.
Nevertheless
, being self-employed
a
lso have
Suggestion
also has
some negative
impact
on individuals and the whole
society
. From personal perspectives, becoming self-employed means that people need to take
responsibility
for themselves. As for those who are not self-disciplined enough or lacking in
time-management
skills, being a
freelancer
could lead to low
efficiency
and
anxiety
. They might find t
hem
people in general
they
accomplish nothing and lose
control
of their own
life
.
Furthermore
, compared with those who working in a
company
, self-employed
group
a
re
Suggestion
is
more likely to suffer from
isolation
and
loneliness
. On the societal
level
, the
popularity
of
self-employment
could pose a
threat
to the current
tax
system
or the
l
abor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
laws, which may
cause
some chaos among
society
. In a
word
, even though g
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a growing number
the growing number
number
of people are attracted by the benefits of
self-employment
, it
also
has some negative impacts on individuals and the
society
. In recent years, it has become far more common for people to be self-employed,
instead
of working for a
corporation
. From my
point
of
view
, there are various explanations for the
phenomenon
and working for ourselves could have certain drawbacks. Several causes a
re contributed
Suggestion
have contributed
are contributing
contribute
to the
rise
of
self-employment
. For starters, many people choosing to
work
for themselves are attracted by the benefits of flexible working hours as well as
freedom
of
creation
. Which means that they
don’t
need to
punch
in and out everyday and less restrictions are imposed on their
work
. That’s probably the
reason
why
self-employment
is especially popular among writers, designers and artists whose jobs require creative thinking rather than rules and regulations.
In
addition
,
internet
development
also
makes freelance available for b
roader
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a broader group
group
of people. N
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internet
plays a vital
role
in connecting people who are in need of certain services with those who can satisfy their requirements. With the
help
of
internet
, people no longer need to rely on a
company
or
organization
to find their
target
customers and they are able to earn decent
income
all by themselves. No
doubt
that an increasing
number
of people start to
work
for themselves.
Nevertheless
, being self-employed a
lsoo have
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also has
also have
some negative
impact
on individuals and the whole
society
. From personal perspectives, becoming self-employed means that people need to take
responsibility
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