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Companies use a variety of methods to improve the sales and their products. What are those methods? Which is the most effective method?

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Nowadays, the market of selling products is
become
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becoming
 competitive which business thought a lot of ideas to increase their sales number.
This
 essay will discuss those ideas and provide the most useful one.
First
 of all, promotion is a way to improve sales in a company which can introduce company products to people. It involves food tasting, brochures handing and machine trialing. By doing those, it provides a chance for consumers to experience selling items and the product will get to know
by
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of
 people.
Secondly
, designing a new product package can get people’s attention.
This
 means
company
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companies
the company
a company
 need to be innovative on products designing which includes colour, creative and unique out looking of products. It may catch
consumer’s eye
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the consumer’s eye
 and spend their money for new packaging products as they feel curious about what the item is.
Finally
, advertising is another important element for market improvement. Putting advertisements can through by many different ways which contain social media, TV and street advertising.
For example
, buying an advertisement space that people can see it easily or the place that with
crowd
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a crowd
crowds
 of people like train stations and shopping centres. Those locations have more opportunities to show products to people and give them a good concept. In conclusion, there are as many as different ways to improve sales or products. Through the discussion of
this
 essay, I believe that the most achievable idea is promotion with real products as people can experience them.
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