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I’ll be working in my area of interest and gain additional experience that excites me the most. Like, cash flow analysis, budgeting, forecasting
financials
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Financials
financial
, variance analysis and market trends are my strength and that I can deploy from the very
first
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 day on the job without
necessary training
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the necessary training
. And I’ll acquire experience of corporate structure by working with senior members of the firm. I’ve worked on many company initiation reports where we have to understand
business dynamics
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the business dynamics
 of a company and to come up with our suggestion. To achieve that, I
analyzed
examined carefully and methodically; broken down for consideration of constituent parts
analysed
 their financial statements thoroughly and
also
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 talked with the management to get
better understanding
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a better understanding
 of their strategy. I’ve a habit of constructing day plan in order to prioritize the work assigned to me and meet all the deadlines as given. And about month-end responsibilities, I’m trained to work under
pressurized situation
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pressurized situations
a pressurized situation
 where we have to be
most efficient
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more efficient
 on time sensitive tasks.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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