You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

Dear Susan, I'
m
excited to tell you that I'
m
coming to Canada for doing
Masters
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Master
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in Business Administration. As the studies are too expensive there, I would like to do some part-time
job
, so that I can bear my expenses and manage to submit my college fees easily. As I'
m
totally new to that country, I would be very grateful if you could help me to find a
job
. My course is starting from March 2020 onwards, so I would like to get a
job
by April.
Also
, my classes are from Monday to Saturday and I'll get free by 3pm. My college
in
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Toronto in Washington Street, so, I want
the
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job
near my college so that I can easily manage to do 3-4 hours
job
and
therefore
study for my exams as well. I'
m
comfortable with any
job
as it pays me well for 3-4 hours.
Also
, I would like to work for 7 days and can
also
manage to give extra hours on Sundays. I'
m
sure you know the city really well, so you can easily help me out to find a good
job
. I'll be landing in Canada in the
last
week of
Feburary
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February
, will see you soon. Take care Alex
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Educational aspirations
  • Work experience
  • Financial independence
  • Resume (or CV)
  • Local job market
  • International student
  • Legal requirements
  • Student work permit
  • Employment trends
  • Time management
  • Networking
  • A part-time position
  • Balance studies and work
  • Job hunting strategies
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