You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Susan,
I'
m
excited to tell you that I'm
coming to Canada for doing Masters
in Business Administration. As the studies are too expensive there, I would like to do some part-time Fix the agreement mistake
Master
job
, so that I can bear my expenses and manage to submit my college fees easily.
As I'm
totally new to that country, I would be very grateful if you could help me to find a job
. My course is starting from March 2020 onwards, so I would like to get a job
by April. Also
, my classes are from Monday to Saturday and I'll get free by 3pm. My college in
Toronto in Washington Street, so, I want Add a missing verb
is in
the
Correct article usage
a
job
near my college so that I can easily manage to do 3-4 hours job
and therefore
study for my exams as well.
I'm
comfortable with any job
as it pays me well for 3-4 hours. Also
, I would like to work for 7 days and can also
manage to give extra hours on Sundays. I'm
sure you know the city really well, so you can easily help me out to find a good job
. I'll be landing in Canada in the last
week of Feburary
, will see you soon.
Take care
AlexCorrect your spelling
February
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