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Is it good for children to start using computers from an early age and spend long hours on them? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

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Nowadays children have become extremely exposed to computers.
To
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For
 some individuals it has benefits while some advocate it has
detrimental impact
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a detrimental impact
 on children. The view that I tend towards,
however is
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however, is
 that there are several disadvantages than advantages of computers.
To begin
 with, because of improvements of
technology there
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technology, there
 are fundamental benefits of computers
on
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for
 children. It is clearly observed that children can obtain plenty of beneficial information on their studies. To illustrate,
youngesters
a young person of either sex
youngsters
 who spend a lot of time
in
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on
with
 computers can achieve better consequences on education in order to search any topic which they do not understand in class.
However
, in spite of
benefits
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the benefits
 of computers there are
also
 clearly drawbacks that children are prone to.
Firstly
, it is inevitable that computers can be
addictuve
causing or characterized by addiction
addictive
additive
.
In addition
, children spend long hours on screen and it can cause serious problems
on
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with
 their health. A striking example is that, if many children waste their time on playing video games each day, they will struggle with lack of concentration on studies.
Secondly
, another main issue concerned is health problems.
Therefore
, durable sitting habits lead to eyesight problems as well as obesity.
Consequently
,
childreb
a young person of either sex
children
 should strive
being
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to be
 gregarious and outgoing. To conclude, it seems to me that
drawbacks
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the drawbacks
 of computers are more principal
such
 as lack of
concentraction
the strength of a solution; number of molecules of a substance in a given volume
concentration
 and health issues.
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