A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • request some advice about a gift for his/her family • ask about activities and clothing in his/her country • find out about the food

#friend #year #visit #country #information #request #advice #gift #activities #food

Hi Alisa, I hope you

have

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a good health. I got your letter

last

month about our next encounter in your country. That's why, I was very happy at that time. As you know well

that

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I have never been to America, so I want to know a few things in advance before my arrival.

Firstly

, what would you like to have from Uzbekistan for yourself and your family? I haven't

meet

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your family for a long time. That's why, I am not truly aware of their likes. So, I need

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your help. I don't know what the weather is like in America in Autumn, that's why, I decided not to take all my clothes because if I take all my clothes, my suitcase will be heavy and I'm big into American style

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than Uzbekistan. So, I want to buy a lot of clothes from America. When it comes to

food

, I don't care about

food

because I guess American

food

is taste. In my opinion, Americans eath more fast

food

. See you super soon. Yours sincerely, Shabnam

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Try to be more specific in your request for advice about clothing. Mention specific activities you might do so Alisa can give more tailored advice.

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Organize your paragraphs better to ensure each contains a single main idea. For example, separate your request for gift advice and questions about activities and clothing into two distinct paragraphs.

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Your tone is friendly and respectful, which is suitable for writing to a friend.

coherence cohesion

Your greeting and closing are well-done and add a personal touch to your letter.

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1Word repetition
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5Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

180 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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