A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • request some advice about a gift for his/her family • ask about activities and clothing in his/her country • find out about the food

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Hi Alisa, I hope you

have

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a good health. I got your letter

last

month about our next encounter in your country. That's why, I was very happy at that time. As you know well

that

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I have never been to America, so I want to know a few things in advance before my arrival.

Firstly

, what would you like to have from Uzbekistan for yourself and your family? I haven't

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your family for a long time. That's why, I am not truly aware of their likes. So, I need

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your help. I don't know what the weather is like in America in Autumn, that's why, I decided not to take all my clothes because if I take all my clothes, my suitcase will be heavy and I'm big into American style

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than Uzbekistan. So, I want to buy a lot of clothes from America. When it comes to

food

, I don't care about

food

because I guess American

food

is taste. In my opinion, Americans eath more fast

food

. See you super soon. Yours sincerely, Shabnam

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task achievement

Try to be more specific in your request for advice about clothing. Mention specific activities you might do so Alisa can give more tailored advice.

coherence cohesion

Organize your paragraphs better to ensure each contains a single main idea. For example, separate your request for gift advice and questions about activities and clothing into two distinct paragraphs.

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Your tone is friendly and respectful, which is suitable for writing to a friend.

coherence cohesion

Your greeting and closing are well-done and add a personal touch to your letter.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

180 words

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