Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children, while others feel it should be purely optional. Discuss these opposing views and give your own opinion.

There is currently a contentious argument over whether
sport
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the sport
is being important in
children
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children's
schools or not. A multitude of
humans claims
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humans, claims
that
sport
plays an essential role in delay activities for Children, whereas, it is some believed that maybe made it as a personal choice.
This
essay is with the
first
view, I am going to examine
this
question from both points of view and
then
give my own opinion with examples on
this
matter.
First
of all, it is an indisputable fact, which is the
sport
has enormous benefits
on
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of
for
to
the
children
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child's
children's
child
health? To be
mere
(comparative of 'much' used with mass nouns) a quantifier meaning greater in size or amount or extent or degree
more
exact, if it plays as a minę part of their school life, it will achieve a great result for them. A particularly good
instance here
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instance, here
is, that at KSA government report in April 2016 shows that a large number of students have a marked rise in their physical fitness rates after the government incorporates the
sport
within their curriculum.
On the other hand
,
however
, it is
also
possible to make the opposing case, it is often argued that the
sport
in
children
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children's
schools should be optional.
Nevertheless
, people have
this
opinion because they think that it is unnecessary, or they do not encourage their children to have used practicing the
sport
from an earlier age.
For example
, students do not play
sport
continuously in their schools, or they are not attending a
sport
class, undoubtedly, they are suffering from weakness and a vast number
of problems health
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of health problems
. By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that
sport
has a positive impact on children.
However
, as long as we are careful to keep in mind the importance of
sport
existing in schools, its benefits are clearly positive.

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