Question: Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. Task-To what extent do u agree or disagree?

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TECHNOLOGY REVOLUTION HAS MADE OUR LIFE EFFORTLESS THAN BEFORE DUE TO VARIETIES OF OPTIONS.
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ESSAY WILL COMPLETELY CONCUR WITH THE NOTION AND DISCUSS VARIOUS REASONS BEHIND
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TREND. TO START WITH, THE PRIME REASON IS SCIENCE HAS MADE NEW INVENTIONS AND MANY PRODUCT WHICH IS AVAILABLE TO LESSER COST THAN ACTUAL COMMODITY.
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, MIDDLE CLASS FAMILY AFFORD IT WITHOUT ANY HASSITATION.
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BOOST THE INCOME OF THE EMPLOYERS AS WELL AS THE GOVERNMENT ECONOMY. THEREFOR, MANY OF US ENJOYING
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NEW CHANG AND NEVER THINK OF THE FUTURE.
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, PEOPLE CAN TRY EACH ITEAM AND NEVER GET BORED WITH SAME TASTE.
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SATISFY THEIR HUNGER WITH DIFFERENT TASTE ESPECIALLY IN THE FOOD VARIETY.
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, FOOD DEPARTMENT SURVEYED SHOWN THAT THE PRODUCT INCREASED UP TO 40% SINCE DECADE.
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CONSIDER AS A NEGAIVE DEVELOPMENT BECAUSE, MORE COMMODITY AVAILABILITY LEADS TO WASTEAGE OF MORE MONEY.
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LEADS TO FINACIAL IMBALANCE IN THE ONE'S FAMILY AND THEY MIGHT ATTEMPT UNLOWFUL ACTIVITIES LIKE, ROBBERY OR THEFT TO CO-OPERATE WITH THE CIRCUMSTANCES ESPECIALLY LOWER CLASS OR MIDDLE CLASS FAMILIES.
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, 50 5 OF THE YOUTH ARE ATTEMTING CRIME DUE TO SATISFY THEIR NEEDS AFTER SEEING MANY OTIONS TO BUY. IN CONCLUSION, I BELIEVE WHEN THERE IS MORE CHOICE, PEOPLE OFTEN GET CONFUSED AND HAVE CURIOSITY TO BUY WITHOUT LOOKING AFTER THE BUDGE.
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, IF WE GUID OUR CHILD IN A CORRECT WAY SINCE CHILDHOOD,
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DEFINITELY THEI WILL UNDERSTANAD OF THE VALUES OF THE PRODUCTS AND USE THEM ACCORDING TO THEIR NEEDS.
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