Competitiveness amoung high school students should be encouraged. Do you agree or disagree?

Competitiveness is one of the common factors to boost someone's productivity. The competitiveness among

students

can be encouraged or discouraged depending on the situation and the outcome. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss both scenarios on

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serious matter. School

students

should be motivated to compete with other

students

so that they can take it as a challenge resulting

the

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improvement in the performance of an individual throughout a calendar year. With the help of

this

sort of environment, A school can prosper with their

students

.

For example

, In third world countries

competition

between

students

and professionals

gets

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importance

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because of their great

result

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results

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in terms of increase in productivity and motivation of an individual. If too much importance

will be

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given to the competing environment

than

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then

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it might lead to

the

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increase in

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numbers

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of

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of an individual. With the introduction of competing

among

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any sector, A person can have a desire to take his own life after

loosing

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that

competition

.

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, In

first world

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countries, In many schools, positioning criteria in an exam

has

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been discontinued to limit the

competition

concept which was leading to

the

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suicide, depression and other illness.

To sum up

,

Competition

should be encouraged which leads to greater results in any walk of

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life.

However

, It

is completely depends

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on the person or organization

either

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whether

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they take it positively or negatively like to increase the productivity,

motivation

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and motivation

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of a person or to

pressurize

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someone too much leading to

the

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depression or other

illness

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.