Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

There is no doubt that these days, the types of sports

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are increasing

are be increasing

day by day and in different physical ways. The question is

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if the government should be banned extreme sports or isn'

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essay I am going to explain my view and draw my personal conclusion. In my opinion, the activities

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of great significance or value

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to our bodies and to reduce risk of some diseases. So, I

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disagree

with

this

argument because some people don'

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feel

intersting

act together or towards others or with others

interacting

with normal sports like run or walk. Some people prefer to do dangerous sports and I think

that is

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concerning or affecting a particular person or his or her private life and personality

personal

freedom.

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say the sports like, sky diving and skiing aren'

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feel owners in worried and their parents feel in worried

also

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will be

fine.

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a small number

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these kinds of sport. In

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the players

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if they

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are practicing

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in absence of

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all safety tools and equipment safety.

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be banned in any

kind of sport. In conclusion

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, although

although

although

some sports make stress for players and for their parents, but

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they are also interesting

they are interesting also

also

when they

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are playing

play

have played

it. Every sport has

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popular, so

we can'

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cancel any of them.