The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.
The line graph compares three regions in terms of
exports
of
wheat
between 1985 and 1990.
Overall
, the three regions experienced different trends in the time period.
While
the
wheat
export in Canada and European countries rose with some fluctuations, the export in Australia fell over time.As the graph shows, Australia's
wheat
export figure started at 15
million
tons
in 1985 followed by a small increase to around 16
million
tons
in 1986.
Then
,
it
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declined steadily until
it
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fell to just over 10
million
tons
in 1990. Regarding Canada's
exports
, in 1985 they shipped approximately 19
million
tons
of
wheat
.
This
figure fell to about 17
million
in 1986, but
then
their
exports
experienced considerable growth to 25
million
tons
in 1988.
Afterward
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, the figure plunged to below 15
million
in 1989, but
then
subsequently
rose to just under 20
million
in 1990.
By contrast
,
the
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wheat
exports
from the European Community experienced an increase in the
six year
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period. In 1985, nearly 16
million
tons
were exported,but
this
number fell to about 14
million
in 1986.
Then
, the
exports
increased to exactly 15
million
tons
in 1987 and 1988 before witnessing steady growth to 19
million
and 21
million
tons
in 1989 and 1990, respectively.
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