The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.
The line graph compares three regions in terms of
exports
of wheat
between 1985 and 1990.Overall
, the three regions experienced different trends in the time period.While
the wheat
export in Canada and European countries rose with some fluctuations, the export in Australia fell over time.As the graph shows, Australia's wheat
export figure started at 15 million
tons
in 1985 followed by a small increase to around 16 million
tons
in 1986. Then
,it
declined steadily until Correct pronoun usage
they
it
fell to just over 10 Correct pronoun usage
they
million
tons
in 1990. Regarding Canada's exports
, in 1985 they shipped approximately 19 million
tons
of wheat
. This
figure fell to about 17 million
in 1986, but then
their exports
experienced considerable growth to 25 million
tons
in 1988. Afterward
, the figure plunged to below 15 Change the spelling
Afterwards
million
in 1989, but then
subsequently
rose to just under 20 million
in 1990.By contrast
, the
Correct article usage
apply
wheat
exports
from the European Community experienced an increase in the six year
period. In 1985, nearly 16 Add a hyphen
six-year
million
tons
were exported,but this
number fell to about 14 million
in 1986. Then
, the exports
increased to exactly 15 million
tons
in 1987 and 1988 before witnessing steady growth to 19 million
and 21 million
tons
in 1989 and 1990, respectively.Submitted by zisanmahamud on
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