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The graph below shows the amount of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the amount of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The provided chart illustrates the
tonnes
 of rubbish
throw
Wrong verb form
thrown
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 by three different companies between 2000 and 2015.
Overall
, there was a downward trend for
the
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apply
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firm A
throw
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to throw
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 the most rubbish in 2000 and was followed by
the
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apply
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industry B. Their production decreased over the period
comparing
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compared
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 to
the
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apply
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company C which has an upward trend, they start with
the
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a
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 lower quantity of waste and became the highest in 2015. First of all,
the
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apply
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company A
throw
Wrong verb form
threw
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 12
tonnes
 of garbage in 2000. Their level of waste production decreased slightly until 2010 before
to reach
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reaching
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 8,8
tonnes
 in 2015. In
comparison
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,comparison
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the
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apply
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industry B throw approximately 8,8
tonnes
 in 2000 and increased sharply until 2005
where
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when
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 they hit a peak of about 9,3
tonnes
.
Then
, their quantity of rubbish decreased dramatically until to get 3
tonnes
 of waste
rejected
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were rejected
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.
This
 company became the lower in
this
 period of time.
On the other hand
,
the
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apply
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firm C increased gradually and became, the major producer of garbage in 2015 with 9,5
tonnes
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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