The graph below shows the amount of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The provided chart illustrates the tonnes of rubbish throw by three different companies between 2000 and 2015. Overall, there was a downward trend for the firm A throw the most rubbish in 2000 and was followed by the industry B. Their production decreased over the
period comparing
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period, comparing
to the company C which has an upward trend, they start with the lower quantity of waste and became the highest in 2015.
First
of all, the company A throw 12 tonnes of garbage in 2000. Their level of waste production decreased slightly until 2010 before to reach 8,8 tonnes in 2015. In comparison the industry B
throw
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throws
approximately 8,8 tonnes in 2000 and increased sharply until 2005 where they hit a peak of about 9,3 tonnes.
Then
, their quantity of rubbish decreased dramatically until to get 3 tonnes of waste rejected.
This
company became the lower in
this
period of time.
On the other hand
, the firm C increased gradually and became, the major producer of garbage in 2015
with
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to
9,5 tonnes.
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