The graph below shows the amount of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The provided chart illustrates the
tonnes
of rubbish throw
by three different companies between 2000 and 2015.
Wrong verb form
thrown
Overall
, there was a downward trend for the
firm A Correct article usage
apply
throw
the most rubbish in 2000 and was followed by Fix the infinitive
to throw
the
industry B. Their production decreased over the period Correct article usage
apply
comparing
to Wrong verb form
compared
the
company C which has an upward trend, they start with Correct article usage
apply
the
lower quantity of waste and became the highest in 2015.
First of all, Correct article usage
a
the
company A Correct article usage
apply
throw
12 Wrong verb form
threw
tonnes
of garbage in 2000. Their level of waste production decreased slightly until 2010 before to reach
8,8 Change the verb form
reaching
tonnes
in 2015. In comparison
Add a comma
,comparison
the
industry B throw approximately 8,8 Correct article usage
apply
tonnes
in 2000 and increased sharply until 2005 where
they hit a peak of about 9,3 Correct word choice
when
tonnes
. Then
, their quantity of rubbish decreased dramatically until to get 3 tonnes
of waste rejected
. Add a missing verb
were rejected
This
company became the lower in this
period of time. On the other hand
, the
firm C increased gradually and became, the major producer of garbage in 2015 with 9,5 Correct article usage
apply
tonnes
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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