Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

With the advent of technology, it has become cheaper and safer to

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abroad than ever before in the history of mankind, and

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has given rise to m

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travel

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and tourism industry.

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some people opine that international travelling has created tension and intolerance among people, I am o

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the firm opinion that tourism is promoting cultural understanding and mutual respect in people’s lives. When people

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outside their own country, they encounter p

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people, which

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a different

set of beliefs and values than their own.

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change led them to think why people of different origins are behaving in c

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a certain way

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with local people and ask them questions about their life and in result they understand their culture and way of life.

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, many westerners find it surprising when they see joint family culture in Asian countries like India and China. Later on

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change not only broaden their horizon, but

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create respect of local people’s value and tradition in eyes of t

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tourists

a tourist

Tourism not only build cultural understanding, but

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tolerance among people from different countries. When people

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abroad to attend sports events like world football cup, world cricket tournament, they sit

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to their rivals. In

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events, people can release their patriotic emotions of their country in the safest and constructive away through chanting and shouting. At the end of the match both teams and audience appreciate each other effort, and

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leads to tolerance and mutual respect. To conclude, international tourism has become a giant industry of modern times. While some people consider that mixing of people from different origin is destructive and unhealthy, I opine that t

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the act of going from one place to another

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abroad is leading to cultural understating, and tolerance in the lives of p

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the public