Some people belive that universities should only accept students with high marks. Others think that students of all ages and ability levels should be able to attend. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Education is the backbone of any nations. It is the key factors for entire
nation
developments
Suggestion
developing
as well as live with healthy life.
Few people doctrine
Suggestion
A few people doctrine
The few people doctrine
that tertiary institutes
opt
(usually followed by 'to') naturally disposed toward
apt
pupils who have excellent marks or grades. While, others suppose that there is no
ages
Suggestion
age
limition
a principle that limits the extent of something
limitation
and who have
capability
Suggestion
the capability
to participate in the universities. In these
eassy
posing no difficulty; requiring little effort
easy
essays
shall delve into both perspectives.
However
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
personally side with the former view. On the positive side, it is no doubt that education is the integral part of any
nation
. It develops both humanity as well as sagacity
which
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which, consequently
consequently
, establish an affluent
conutry
a politically organized body of people under a single government
country
.
A
Suggestion
An
acknowledge person is crucial ones in terms of development, judgement,
infact
to teach others.
For instance
, if we think that only who have got maximum marks should
br
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
be
given opportunity to become teachers as our society believes that brilliant students only suitable for it.
However
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
also
admit
it but
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it, but
it's
also
essential to encourage them in others sectors
such
as business, political
so on
in the near future
soon
as all those staffs are
also
indespensible part
Suggestion
an indispensable part
indispensable part
of our
nation
.
Furthermore
, if we provide proper education who have capability in spite of feeble students. We get some benefits from them
such
as it's assists to dispose
off
connects a noun with the preceding word
of
illiteracy
subsequently
, accelerate him/her self to do something well for his/her betterment which has a positive impact on
nation
Suggestion
the nation
a nation
nations
. As
it
it is
it's
quiet
to a degree (not used with a negative)
quite
impossible to develop country only by meritorious
pupils but
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pupils, but
also
need an assist hand of rest of all staffs. On the down side, brilliant students are a piece of diamond so, it
make
Suggestion
makes
sure that it will utilise proper way. A high marks obtain students obviously word hard for getting it so he/she know well how to prosper in life which eventually influence on country developments. But if we ensure right thing on right
palce
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place, then
place then
then
whole chain supply will become deleterious for us. To
summing
Suggestion
sum
up,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
reiterate my opinion by saying that we make sure that who have
capability
Suggestion
the capability
to do most brain storming
field
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field, then
then
without doubt opt brilliant pupils but it is
also
ensure
Suggestion
ensuring
ensured
that not aside low efficiency students as they are
also
an
Suggestion
a
crucial part and need to encourage them for
betterment
Suggestion
the betterment
.

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