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Computer are being used more and more in education. Some people say this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both views and give tour opinion.

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It is a true fact that with the advent of technology learning methods
have undergone
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has undergone
 a drastic change in the education system globally. In
this
 case some people believe
use
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the use
 of computers in the education sector is
become
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becoming
 change while others have an opposite opinion about it.
However
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However, this
this
 essay will examine both sides of an
arguement
a fact or assertion offered as evidence that something is true
argument
 before deducing a reasonable conclusion. Introduction to computers can bring in
alot
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a lot
 of ill effects to the students.
This
 will not only bring a detrimental effect physically on their
eyes but
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eyes, but
 will
also
 reduce the student teacher relationship.
For example
, with all the tutorials and assignments going online, students will be unable to ask
question
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questions
, which will lead to learning difficulties.
On the other hand
, laptops have bought in a positive change in the way learning can happen. It provides
powerfull
having great power or force or potency or effect
powerful
 tools like Microsoft Excel and
Powerpoint
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PowerPoint
.
For example
, Microsoft Excel helps analysing the data in
efficient manner
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an efficient manner
 and
Powerpoint
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PowerPoint
 help presenting in the form of graphs,
barcharts
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bar charts
 etc. Computers
also
 helps storing the past information in the digital form and can be extracted whenever required, which eradicates the need to store in the notebooks. In conclusion, computers has
redifned
give a new or different definition to
redefined
 the way learning can happen and in future it will play an even bigger role. In my opinion rising use of computers is a positive phenomenon rather than having negative consequences.

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