You recently spent the night at an expensive hotel. There was a problem with your room, but the hotel staff was unable to do anything about it. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter -describe the problem. -explain what happened when you asked the hotel staff for help. -say what you would like the manager to do.

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Respected Sir, I have been a regular visitor at your renowned

hotel

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and always prefer to stay here during my every visit to Delhi. The wonderful ambience of the

hotel

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along with the courteous staff has always fascinated me.

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, my

last

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visit was a sheer disappointment.

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Saturday I visited Delhi for one day for my business meeting and stayed at your

hotel

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. After the whole tiring day when I came to relax in my room, I noticed that the air-conditioner was not working.

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, the ceiling fan was

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non-functional, it was

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hot summer night with a recorded temperature of 48 degrees and it was extremely unbearable for me to stay in the non-airy room.

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, I immediately complained about the situation to the available staff and requested them to change my room. They simply denied my request and sent one person to repair the air-conditioner but he was not able to fix it. What is more, I had to board my return flight early in the morning and no sleep for the whole night made me restless. Considering the severity of the problem, I request you to take some measures to tackle

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of issues. Primarily, the

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employees should be instructed to resolve the issues of visitors on time.

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, the proper maintenance of the infrastructure should be done for its proper functioning, in order to provide a pleasant stay. Looking forward to immediate actions. Yours faithfully, Prabh

Sat Nov 30 2019

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

244 words

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