Some people think that art is essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion
A few people believe that an
art
Is futile
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futile, however
however
others believe that it is an important subject
at
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of
preliminary class
of Suggestion
a preliminary class
school
.
In my opinion art
plays significant role
in Suggestion
a significant role
development
of children because it enhances child imagination power, thinking capacity and additional skill which will facilitate in participating in competition and will bring laurel to the Suggestion
the development
school
if become triumphant so must be taught in school
with full valour. Now a days competition is stiff in Job market pattern of selection has drastically changed and maximum candidates has similar education and experience level but
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level, but
then
probability of his/her attaining a job is high reasons possessing skilled which others are lacking, company will cherrypicked
this
job aspirants on expectation that imagination skilled helps in making faster decision in organisation it shows here that if he pursued art
in childhood it means his future will be stable and sound.
Bundle of stalwart in arts
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the arts
are remembered
for their mesmerising and soulful work and their painting are being sold in millions Suggestion
is remembered
such
as Picaso, MF Hussain etc. Reminiscence of painting for these legendary are
soothing and full of gratification. Business tycoons are showing interest to buy Suggestion
is
eye catching painting
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an eye catching painting
the eye catching painting
this
way money also
generating. In school
twice in a week art
class should be continued role of teachers are unflinching and attachment with students deeply coordinated its dry subject
in some period student may lose zeal
to attend the class.
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the zeal
Art
is somehow boring subject
for some students and not paying attention, dedication is lacking so here school
faculties will have herculean task
to attract attention of stoic student. What teachers Suggestion
a Herculean task
Herculean task
has
to do here to assemble students is single classroom and elaborates the benefits of Suggestion
have
art
its future and carrier
. Scope is less in the particular occupation for which you are trained
career
art
and here government should promote art
and culture as it represent India rich heritage
. Abundant of luminaries in Suggestion
an India rich heritage
art
has been passed away
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away, however
however
despite their significant role in cultivating the interest of this
subject
amongst student we forget to remember in their death anniversary and never pay homage seriously this
is deplorable and depicting antipathy.
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conclusion, I
art
should be paid special attention.Submitted by khanzubair0119 on
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