more and more people are relaying private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars and suggest at least possible solution.

Nowadays, the
car
becomes the major means of
transport
for the majority of the population.
However
, the increase amount of private
transport
has an important impact on the environment. In
this
essay, I will expose the main problems which can be caused by
this
new development and give some possible solutions.
First
of all, pollution and traffic conjecture became the main preoccupation of the government. Indeed, traditionally, they need oil to work, but once
this
oil is used
into
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in
the engine, it is
releaved
(of pain or sorrow) made easier to bear
relieved
released
in the air in CO2 form. According to the professor Mark in his article for the CNRS, cars are the principle
responsible
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responsibility
responsibilities
of pollution in the world.
Moreover
, the fact that almost the majority of the inhabitants choose to
use
their own
car
than public
transport
or to get their job by walking create
traffic problem
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a traffic problem
and slow down the circulation.
For example
, it is counted in China that 300
millions
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million
cars circulate in the road
everyday
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every day
, with
this
score China became the higher in term of
transport
issues.
Therefore
, I am sure that if the population are more informed they will never
use
transport
.
Furthermore
, I think that the main solutions to the several problems quote are becoming more environmentally friendly and
favourise
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
bike
. Government should give more restrictions to companies,
such
as ask them to be
most respectful
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more respectful
on
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of
the nature and to find another source of propulsion than oil.
For instance
, Peugeot decided
few years
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a few years
ago to create the
electical
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electric
electrical
car
, it does not reject CO2 in consequence does not cause greenhouse.
the
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The
secon
coming next after the first in position in space or time or degree or magnitude
second
solution is to
favourise
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
bike
than single
transport
. It helps to keep people fit and
limits
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limit
traffic problems.
it
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It
is predicted than if all the population
start
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starts
to
use
bike
they will not have
issue
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an issue
the issue
anymore with the circulation. In conclusion, the
use
of
transport
is
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was
higher than
few years
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a few years
ago. It affects on one hand, our environment and
on the other hand
, our daily life by growing up the rate of pollution and creating circulation congestions.
Nevertheless
, the simple solution could be to
use
bike
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bikes
a bike
instead
single
car
or just by imposing
industrise
the people or companies engaged in a particular kind of commercial enterprise
industries
industry
to be more eco-friendly.
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