more and more people are relaying private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars and suggest at least possible solution.
Nowadays, the
car
becomes the major means of transport
for the majority of the population. However
, the increase amount of private transport
has an important impact on the environment. In this
essay, I will expose the main problems which can be caused by this
new development and give some possible solutions.
First
of all, pollution and traffic conjecture became the main preoccupation of the government. Indeed, traditionally, they need oil to work, but once this
oil is used into
the engine, it is Suggestion
in
releaved
in the air in CO2 form. According to the professor Mark in his article for the CNRS, cars are the principle (of pain or sorrow) made easier to bear
relieved
released
responsible
of pollution in the world. Suggestion
responsibility
responsibilities
Moreover
, the fact that almost the majority of the inhabitants choose to use
their own car
than public transport
or to get their job by walking create traffic problem
and slow down the circulation. Suggestion
a traffic problem
For example
, it is counted in China that 300 millions
cars circulate in the road Suggestion
million
everyday
, with Suggestion
every day
this
score China became the higher in term of transport
issues. Therefore
, I am sure that if the population are more informed they will never use
transport
.
Furthermore
, I think that the main solutions to the several problems quote are becoming more environmentally friendly and favourise
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
bike
. Government should give more restrictions to companies, such
as ask them to be most respectful
Suggestion
more respectful
on
the nature and to find another source of propulsion than oil. Suggestion
of
For instance
, Peugeot decided few years
ago to create the Suggestion
a few years
electical
Suggestion
electric
electrical
car
, it does not reject CO2 in consequence does not cause greenhouse. the
Suggestion
The
secon
solution is to coming next after the first in position in space or time or degree or magnitude
second
favourise
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
bike
than single transport
. It helps to keep people fit and limits
traffic problems. Suggestion
limit
it
is predicted than if all the population Suggestion
It
start
to Suggestion
starts
use
bike
they will not have issue
anymore with the circulation.
In conclusion, the Suggestion
an issue
the issue
use
of transport
is
higher than Suggestion
was
few years
ago. It affects on one hand, our environment and Suggestion
a few years
on the other hand
, our daily life by growing up the rate of pollution and creating circulation congestions. Nevertheless
, the simple solution could be to use
bike
Suggestion
bikes
a bike
instead
single car
or just by imposing industrise
to be more eco-friendly.the people or companies engaged in a particular kind of commercial enterprise
industries
industry
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