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Violence among young people has increased dramatically over the past 50 years. This rise moves in tandem with a growth in violent media. Thus, the conclusion can be drawn that violent media is the main cause of violence among young people. Refute this claim.

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Juvenile delinquency has become a top issue among the globe for many decades. It is believed that
media
Suggestion
the media
 is the prime culprit while
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 partially agree to it as other options leading to crime are available. Violent media is the one of the reasons of early crime
commiters
a machine for performing calculations automatically
computers
. To be more precise, most young children who watch brutal movies
such
 as murdering, bombing
are
Suggestion
is
 more vulnerable to be aggressive. By watching these, they become numb to real life.
Consequently
, they turn out to be less merciful to his surroundings. No parental control is the other reason which leads the young to astray.
For example
, is quite apparent that most parents are busy working so that they will provide the need of their children. And
this
 less control over their children remaining them the idea of doing anything what they want. Statistically, most juveniles are dashing out in the evenings with lack of things to do. When
this
 happens, it mostly ends up with crime. All in all, it is clear that
mass media
Suggestion
the mass media
 and less caring are the main ways leading the young to early commitment. If we start to tackle the issue now, we may be able to decrease it
further
.

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