Some people believe that nowadays we have too much choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is
asumed
adopted in order to deceive
assumed
ashamed
that now a days our life is full of options. Variety of options provide us chance to select.
This
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essay will argue about the
availabilty
the quality of being at hand when needed
availability
of choice. Presently the market is consumer based
,
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,
well said"Consumer is God". And every
second
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consumer has a different likes and dislikes, so it is very
importent
of great significance or value
important
for every market player to have a sufficient number of choices to grab the market. I agree that there are
number
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a number
of choices available in many product categories like a toothpaste,
presviously
at an earlier time or formerly
previously
it had only one or two options
available but
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available, but
now there are so many brands with a vast range of products.
Same thing
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The same thing
applied on other consumer goods like shampoo
,
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,
soaps
,
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,
busicuits
any of various small flat sweet cakes
biscuits
, chocolates
,
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,
cosmetics and other
brevarage
any liquid suitable for drinking
beverage
items.
This
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kind of alternatives
make
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makes
people confuse,
that is
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why people spend more time on selection.
Athough
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Although
such
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a long time was taken in
selection
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the selection
, still users always feel
skeptical
denying or questioning the tenets of especially a religion
sceptical
about their decision. On
other side
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the other side
there are some products which are still trending with
lessor
of less size or importance
lesser
options. People are happy with fewer options as it
dosen
a measured portion of medicine taken at any one time
dose
not make any dilemma. In
this
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case buying
become
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becomes
easier and smoother.
Eamples
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Examples
Employees
are like Medical Equipments, even if manufactures provide any variety, it slightly make
difference
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a difference
the difference
. As doctor
choose
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chooses
it according to
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
work rather than
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
apperance
outward or visible aspect of a person or thing
appearance
or taste. So providing choices to clients is
good but
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good, but
upto
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up to
the one limit. I agree that
now a days
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
a number of options provided to customers.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • decision fatigue
  • myriad
  • dissatisfaction
  • regret
  • paralysis of action
  • empowers
  • preferences
  • innovation
  • competitiveness
  • fosters
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