Serial drama on tv plays an important social role.Do you agree or disagree?

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It is
irrefutae
that, in
this
new era technology is rising day to day. As well as most of the people in leisure time they spend more time on the TV
programes
an announcement of the events that will occur as part of a theatrical or sporting event
programme
. There are several different
types
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type
programs are played on television.
Such
as: drama
,
Accept space
,
movie
,
Accept space
,
action
,
Accept space
,
romantic
,
Accept space
,
thrilling
,
Accept space
,
sports and so on.
Therefore
,
some of people said
Suggestion
some people said
that these types of program shown on
tv
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TV
are important for
community
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the community
communities
. I firmly disagree with the given statement and the reason for my stand will be
analyze
examined carefully and methodically; broken down for consideration of constituent parts
analysed
further
.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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