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Serial drama on TV plays an important social role. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is irrefutable that, in
this
 new era technology is rising day to day. As well as most of the people in leisure time they spent more time on the TV programs. There are several different type programs are played on television.
Such
 as: movies, action, romantic, thrilling, sports and so on.
Therefore
, some of the people said that these types of programs shown on TV are crucial for communities. I firmly disagree with the given statement and the reason for my stand will be analysed
further
.
To begin
 with, in
this
 competitive era people live a stressful life. When, they watch these cinemas channel it will effect on the
mind
 and their behaviour rudely with the other humans.
For instance
, crime petrol and Savdhan India are most popular. Which are depicted on respectively SONY and Life OK channels. In these
serial
Suggestion
serials
 are only depends on offences.
Therefore
, crowd, mostly the negative effects on their
mind
.
Furthermore
, some serials are
such
 as that they develop both good and bad
effective
Suggestion
effects
effect
 on public brain as those shows including a character who play a role like villain and
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 main role of hero. In these
type
Suggestion
types
 of
case most
Suggestion
cases, most
cases most
 of the people like
character
Suggestion
the character
 of
villain
Suggestion
the villain
 and someone
is catch
Suggestion
are catching
are caught
have caught
catch
 up the negative thinking.
On the other hand
, some have good effect on the mankind
mind
.
For example
, Tarak Maheta Ka Oulta Chasma is very popular in our nation
,
Accept space
,
these
denotes a person or thing
this
 is the comedy serial and all culture types of people are staying there as well as all different occupied person lives.
Therefore
, these ways are better for the human
mind
 and positive reply to others. In conclusions there are numerous serials are effects on peoples
mind
 badly as well as others shows are positive effect.

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