More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. some people say that the price increase of fattening food will solve this problem .to what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries around the world, a large number of people are getting obese. It is argued by some people that raising the money of high-fat items will reduce its consumption and thereby people’s overweight issue will be addressed. I disagree with the opinion because some people are addicted to fast

food

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which contains high amount of fat and simply increasing the

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will not cut down their fat intake. There are some other additional reasons for my view which will be stated in

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essay. The most compelling reason for holding my view is that many youngsters are not ready to avoid ready-made

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and its unique taste just because of a rise in

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, they continue to consume high-fat

food

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items and ignore their health problems.

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, McDonald’s outlets around the world deliver

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which contains

enormous amount

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an enormous amount

of saturated fat.

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, a study found that most people prefer McDonald

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over healthy alternatives because of its distinctive taste.

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, people are ready to buy those

foods even

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foods, even

for a higher

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, high-fat foods are not the only reason for obesity among people. Nowadays, a large number of people are leading a sedentary lifestyle which is considered as one of the major reasons for obesity.

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, physical exercise plays a vital role in maintaining a healthy body. Due to

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reason, increasing the

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of fatty foods does not solely address the overweight problem. In conclusion, I totally disagree with the opinion that

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the high cost

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causing

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is the ideal solution to control it

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Public

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The public

are ready to pay anything for foods which are easily available and having

pleasant taste

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a pleasant taste

even if the fat content is higher.

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, I believe that encouraging / promoting physical exercise is more crucial for maintaining body weight than regulating fatty

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