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More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. some people say that the price increase of fattening food will solve this problem .to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In many countries around the world, a large number of people are getting obese. It is argued by some people that raising the money of high-fat items will reduce its consumption and thereby people’s overweight issue will be addressed. I disagree with the opinion because some people are addicted to fast
food
 which contains high amount of fat and simply increasing the
price
 will not cut down their fat intake. There are some other additional reasons for my view which will be stated in
this
 essay. The most compelling reason for holding my view is that many youngsters are not ready to avoid ready-made
food
 and its unique taste just because of a rise in
price
.
Therefore
, they continue to consume high-fat
food
 items and ignore their health problems.
For instance
, McDonald’s outlets around the world deliver
food
 which contains
enormous amount
Suggestion
an enormous amount
 of saturated fat.
However
, a study found that most people prefer McDonald
food
 over healthy alternatives because of its distinctive taste.
Thus
, people are ready to buy those
foods even
Accept comma addition
foods, even
 for a higher
price
.
Secondly
, high-fat foods are not the only reason for obesity among people. Nowadays, a large number of people are leading a sedentary lifestyle which is considered as one of the major reasons for obesity.
Therefore
, physical exercise plays a vital role in maintaining a healthy body. Due to
this
 reason, increasing the
price
 of fatty foods does not solely address the overweight problem. In conclusion, I totally disagree with the opinion that
high cost
Suggestion
the high cost
 of
food
 causing
obase
use as a basis for; found on
base
 is the ideal solution to control it
.
Accept space
.
Public
Suggestion
The public
 are ready to pay anything for foods which are easily available and having
pleasant taste
Suggestion
a pleasant taste
 even if the fat content is higher.
In addition
, I believe that encouraging / promoting physical exercise is more crucial for maintaining body weight than regulating fatty
food
.
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