Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

There is no doubt that the rate of committing the same crime is tremendously increasing nowadays. In

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essay, the two main root causes of why repeated crimes are increasing in society and some possible solutions to address the phenomenon will be discussed. The

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main root cause of repeated crimes by the social outlaws is due to their increased confidence to hack the existing and un-updated

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systems. The criminals have failed in their previous attempts. Learning from their previous failures, they continue to attempt their updated and sophisticated methods for committing the crimes unnoticed.

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, a majority of outlaws struggle to

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themselves financially, because their past criminal records obstruct them to gain quality jobs. Only a marginal number of employers will hire them; yet, the quality of the jobs

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incomparable with that of normal people. For financial reasons, they will continue to break the

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laws, even

if the legal consequences are at their stakes. Despite the weakness in the current

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, organizations and the government can surmount the challenges; they should start investing in a robust

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system

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that automatically updates their

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with recent technology. With a great technological advancement made nowadays, banks and the government can improve their

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by allocating their budget to the

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.

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, it is the government’s role to

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criminals with financial means. Providing them with

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a monthly allowance

while they learn skilled work allows them to acquire upgraded jobs, in which their salaries are enough to

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themselves. In turn,

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reduces the number of

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crimes, as the reasons for committing crimes gradually dissipate. To conclude, social outlaws commit

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repeated crimes mainly due to two reasons: growing confidence to hack the existing

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and financial challenges. If the government upgrades their

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and financially

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the criminals as post-treatment, the rate of repeated crimes will gradually reduce.