Some people believe that to be a successful sportsperson, one needs to have a natural ability. Others think that hard work and practice are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Achieving the ultimate
success
from a
sport
has long been a prevailing challenge among
majority
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the majority
a majority
of contemporary
sportsperson
despite the degree of skills and practice they possess.
However
, it is believed by some that,
success
soles
depends
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depend
upon the innate abilities a sportsman possess while others believe that it depends upon the effort they exerted. As far as I am concerned, dealing with the issues surrounding being
success
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successful
from a
sport
is best solved by, reinforcing mutual contribution of both skills and continuous practices. Owing to the innate nature of humans, one individual is totally distinct from another in terms of both physically and mentally. Due to
this
reason, it is observed that, especially in
sport
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sporting
contests, individuals who possess born abilities tend to perform better than others. Individuals who support
this
notion
further
assert that, their unique born features attribute them to be
predominant
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predominantly
from
sport
activities. In fact, it is seemingly evident that
majority
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the majority
of world famous players follow their unique style which enable them to gain a competitive edge in a game. A classic paradigm example would be famous cricketer, Lasith Malinga. He possesses a very uncommon bowling action which
enable
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enables
him to become not only
famous but
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famous, but
also
achieve the ultimate career goal
:
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nominating as the world best twenty-twenty bowler
On the other hand
, it is no doubt that continuous practicing and monitoring could
subsequently
lead to achieve significant improvement in their performances, provided that they constantly trace and rectify their errors. Another evident advantage of
this
is, it encourages sportsman to explore new strategies and develop relatively versatile skills which might bring about enormous benefits during the game. Kumar Sungakkara is the perfect example, who
have proved
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have proven
this
concept up to an extent where he became the best batsman in all three formats by solely relying on his practices and most importantly identifying his strengths and weaknesses.
However
, while I believe that innate physical and mental skills seem mandatory, I
also
believe that in order to maintain the
success
and ensure
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of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
consistency, one must exert a large amount of hard work
.
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.
Thus it
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Thus, it
is highly recommend
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is highly recommended
that
mutual contribution
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the mutual contribution
of
born
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bearing
skills and practicing could largely address
this
concern constructively In conclusion, there is a clear argument that what is more important to obtain
success
in sports, whether
their
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they're
born talents or hard work.
However
, mutual contribution of both could ensure a far consistent
success
.

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