Some say that people live in high-rise apartments are lonely and unhappy, while others say that it’s advantageous to stay in high-rise apartments Discuss both views and give your opinion

Owing to the

fact

that space availability in urban areas to cater the staggering increase of population is limited,

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the concept

behind high-

rise

apartments are here to stay driven by new state of the art civil construction techniques.

Therefore individuals

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Therefore, individuals

opt for high-

rise

apartments as their permanent

stay regardless

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stay, regardless

of the negative consequences which might experience in

the longer

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the long

run. Due to

this

, it is believed by some that people live in high

rise

apartments tend to live a lonely

life

and seem to be unhappy while others believe that there are numerous merits certainly associated with apartment

life style

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

.

However

, while I believe that there could be loneliness up to a certain extent, I

also

believe that tenants could strengthen the

inter-relationship

mutual or reciprocal relation or relatedness

interrelationships

interrelationship

among their immediate circle to tackle

this

concern constructively Due to the

fact

that human being a social animal, he or she seeks the companionship with another individual when he or she gets a leisure time and rather opt

for

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to

expand their immediate circle in the attempt of self-satisfaction. Due to

this

reason,

individual

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the individual

individuals

an individual

ought to believe that, residents who live in a high

rise

apartment find it is difficult to form their immediate circle, thereby curtailing them to share their joy and sorrow with their

neighbors

a person who lives (or is located) near another

neighbours

and ultimately lead to spend an isolated lifestyle. In

fact

, by virtue of the culture associated with high

rise

apartments,

majority

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the majority

a majority

of residents tend to expose their thoughts and feelings mostly with their family members rather sharing them with

neighbors

a person who lives (or is located) near another

neighbours

, resulting devastating impacts to the

inter-personal

occurring among or involving several people

interpersonal

relationship among

neighbors

a person who lives (or is located) near another

neighbours

. Despite the multiple social classes available, in the developing countries

majority

of the population belongs to middle-class in which their disposable monthly income is below the border line,

thus

their budget allocation is prioritized with a significance given to accommodation and due to

this they tend to

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this, they tend to

purchase small residents.

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Therefore, it

is difficult to keep their

grand-parents

a parent of your father or mother

grandparents

with them, resulting

further

isolation to both parents and children

On the other hand

, high

rise

apartments could bring about numerous desirable outcomes in terms of providing significant convenience to tenants.

Firstly

, most of those apartments are located close to urban areas, thereby enabling residents to save their time while going to offices, schools, shopping and even hostiles. It is seemingly evident that,

this

could largely encourage to reduce their work stress due to the

fact

that they possess

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a lot

of time to spend with their family and maintain an equilibrium between work-

life

and family

life

. Another evident advantage is that, due to the close proximity to

majority

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the majority

of film-halls, amusement parks and many more recreational events, residents possess ample opportunities to enjoy.

However

, as far as I am concerned, even though I believe there could be relatively versatile advantages associated with there could several downsides in term of isolation and loneliness. Dealing with the issues surrounding isolation could be best solved by strengthening the inner-circle and enhancing the relationship between

neighbors

a person who lives (or is located) near another

neighbours

, which could encourage to spend a social

life

rather than an isolated

life

. In conclusion, despite the benefits associated with a high-

rise

apartment

life

style,

majority

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the majority

of individuals claim that there could be several issues.

However

, individuals could

analyze

consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning

analyse

this

under close scrutiny and improve the quality of

inter-personal

occurring among or involving several people

interpersonal

relationships in order to tackle

this

issue and enjoy the

favors

the general atmosphere of a place or situation and the effect that it has on people

flavours

of

this

concept.