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People argue that children should have the freedom

#people #children #freedom
Some people argue that children should have the freedom to choose their own things which they will eat
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wear
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read
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play
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watch and so on.
others
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Others
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parents should not
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priority, on
 Children's desire because if they always follow children’s choices one day they will become selfish.In my opinion
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parents should focus on children's choices so that they can think of themselves as independent. But parents need to keep balance. It is important for children to make their own choices.
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In
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 way they will be Self-reliant and independent.
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If
 the children can decide their
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choices, it
 is
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proven
proved
 that they have an extra skill
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 taking decision fast.
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wants, he
 is more likely to be successful.
On the other hand
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always letting children
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make
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own, it
 is increased chances of becoming selfish.
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For
 example
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my cousin
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she is 6 years old
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she always likes to watch cartoons.
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She
 does not think whether others family members like or not.If she growi

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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