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Computer are becoming an essential part of school lesson.Discuss the advantages and the disadvantages.

Recently, Information Technology has been an integral part in the education process. Most of teachers and students nowadays fundamentally rely on computers to illustrate/study
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 lessons.
This
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 lessons. One of the major features of computers is that it is a powerful tool to engage students in
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 lessons by its attractive way of presenting materials. Having displayed with bright coloured and poly-figure models
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 a teacher's presentation may be enhanced.
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, it would increasingly
grap
take hold of so as to seize or restrain or stop the motion of
grab
grasp
 the interest of students and encourage them to
attent
be present at (meetings, church services, university), etc.
attend
 and interact. Online research is another
privilage
a special advantage or immunity or benefit not enjoyed by all
privilege
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computer's
 grant to students. It is a significant function needed for their future careers, as students would inevitably need to surf the internet through online resources.
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 if there were no means of digital research
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 it would be gruelling on a researcher to obtain his desired information among physical books.
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research process
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research, process
 would be buffered and much more time would be consumed.
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 spending plenty of time playing games on computers is considered a clear misuse of technology
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 Not only does it waste their time and prevents them from accomplishing the more important tasks, but it might
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 build them up the procrastinating habit
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, computers are no substitute for learning a basic skill as important as handwriting without which complex motor and cognitive skills'
developement
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
 would never be fully attained. To conclude
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despite the fact that
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the computer
computers
 became a vitally necessary appliance in
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 lessons, users should use it wisely for the benefit of their education goals after which they learn essential basic skills.

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