Some people believe that teenagers are facing more problems in their life than they did in the past and this is because parents are spending more time at work than at home. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is irrefutable that today's parents are very

buzy

actively or fully engaged or occupied

busy

in their work as

compred

examine and note the similarities or differences of

compared

past

Suggestion

the past

.So one section of society

hold

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holds

this

notion that now youngsters have many

hassels

an angry disturbance

hassles

horses

houses

related to their

life

than in the past.

However i

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However, I

However I

agree with

this

point.

First

of all

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teenagers face more problems in their daily

life

this

is because of both the parents are working and

childern

a young person of either sex

children

spend most of the time alone.Teenagers do not get

proper guidness so

Suggestion

the proper goodness, so

the proper goodness so

proper goodness so

they see problems.

For example

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after 10

definite article

the

standard children are in worry that what subjects are good for them.Sometimes they

choosed

pick out, select, or choose from a number of alternatives

chose

chased

choose

wrong

decisionand

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decision and

they faced problems in

whole

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the whole life

life

Secondly

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some teenagers are living with their grandparents.

Olderparents

Suggestion

Older parents

said

express in words

told

to children according to their own choice like what they should wear and where should they go.

but

Suggestion

But

todays generation younger ones do things according to the latest trends.

Moreover

, joint families

are merge

Suggestion

are merging

into nuclear

familes

a social unit living together

families

.Children are living without supervision and sometimes teenaged

choosed

pick out, select, or choose from a number of alternatives

chose

wrong path

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the wrong path

a wrong path

for

instance they

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instance, they

see unnecessary things from

internet

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the internet

and follow them it creates problems in their daily

life

. To sum up

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today teenaged live alone because of both parents are

employess

a worker who is hired to perform a job

employees

employers

employed

so they do not get good

guidness

that which is pleasing or valuable or useful

goodness

and grandparents are not following

new trend

Suggestion

the new trend

new trends

a new trend

and cease their grandchildren to follow that trend.And families are small so no one have at home to see the children so they face problems.

Tue Dec 03 2019

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
28
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

226 words

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Some people believe that teenagers are facing more problems in their life than they did in the past and this is because parents are spending more time at work than at home. Do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

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The qualities that help people reach success in modern life cannot be learned in university or other academic institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

When it comes to language education, there are differing opinions. Some believe that small class sizes are ideal for language learning, while others contend that the number of students does not impact the learning experience significantly. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couples who decide to do this.

in the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be the passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?