All cars that burn fossil fuel should be banned and electric cars whould replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

#cars #fuel #whould

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of all I can say I'm totally

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way easily. The world is going through bad everyday and maybe we don't see the changes

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after years we will see clearly. Climate changing is going to affect all of us and all animals and not just climate changing

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on the other hand

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we have air pollution.Let's check China.People are wearing masks because of air pollution

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course there

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it's affecting by what we are doing to world as individuals. When we check the reasons of air pollution we see carbon

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, not filtered factories, cars with fuel. So why we shouldn't ban the factories or why we are not using the cars with electric? We should save the world and care it.

Tue Dec 03 2019

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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142 words

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All cars that burn fossil fuel should be banned and electric cars whould replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Some think they can use as much fresh water as they want, but others say governments should limit water use because it is not endless. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people feel that the private lives of celebrities should not be openly shared by the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.