Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission outweighthe diadvantages ?

The museums are the places where the historically valuable

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a distinct part that can be specified separately in a group of things that could be enumerated on a list

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and documents are kept.

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is as a library for the citizens.

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, there is an argument to most of

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the museums

are charged

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an entrance fee

, but some are not.

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firmly deny

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idea and

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will state the reasons for my opinion. It is seen

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positively

when the

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is not charged any

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from the visitors. But when we think about it deeply, there are some powerful drawbacks.

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of all, the visitors will not realise the real value of the

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. How will it happen?

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is because, when the

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does not

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any fees

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for

the visitors, the visitors will misuse it. As the result of

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is, historically valuable

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will be damaged.

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the

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has to spend an ample amount of money to

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restore by replacing a part or putting together what is torn or broken

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repaired

and fixed those damages. For an instance, in

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context, there

is a free education for all people in the country. But the people do not

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become imbued

absorb

the benefits from it and they do not know the value of it.

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, the things that provide free of

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will not be valuable for the people.

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, the

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activities may neglect from the

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. The reason for

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is, when they do not

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any type of fee, they will not be able to pay salaries for their staff members and maintain the other activities of

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the museum

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. As the result of

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, the

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will be perished from the

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society, then

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it will be hard to pass the historical knowledge to the

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generation.

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the history of the country will deteriorate. To sum up my writing,

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reiterate that to avoid the drawbacks of

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argument the

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of the

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should

charge

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the entrance fee

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for

the visitors.