Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission outweighthe diadvantages ?

The museums are the places where the historically valuable

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a distinct part that can be specified separately in a group of things that could be enumerated on a list

items

and documents are kept.

In other words

, the

museum

is as a library for the citizens.

Hence

, there is an argument to most of

museums

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the museums

are charged

entrance fee

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an entrance fee

, but some are not.

Personally i

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Personally, I

Personally I

firmly deny

this

idea and

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

will state the reasons for my opinion. It is seen

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positively

when the

museum

is not charged any

charge

from the visitors. But when we think about it deeply, there are some powerful drawbacks.

First

of all, the visitors will not realise the real value of the

museum

. How will it happen?

This

is because, when the

authority

does not

charge

any fees

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for

the visitors, the visitors will misuse it. As the result of

this

is, historically valuable

iteams

a distinct part that can be specified separately in a group of things that could be enumerated on a list

items

will be damaged.

Then

the

authority

has to spend an ample amount of money to

repaire

restore by replacing a part or putting together what is torn or broken

repair

repaired

and fixed those damages. For an instance, in

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Sri

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Lankan

context there

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context, there

is a free education for all people in the country. But the people do not

absobe

become imbued

absorb

the benefits from it and they do not know the value of it.

Hence

, the things that provide free of

charge

will not be valuable for the people.

Moreover

, the

maintaince

activity involved in maintaining something in good working order

maintenance

activities may neglect from the

authority

. The reason for

this

is, when they do not

charge

any type of fee, they will not be able to pay salaries for their staff members and maintain the other activities of

museum

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the museum

museums

. As the result of

this

, the

museum

will be perished from the

society

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society, then

then

it will be hard to pass the historical knowledge to the

next

generation.

finally

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Finally

the history of the country will deteriorate. To sum up my writing,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

reiterate that to avoid the drawbacks of

this

argument the

authority

of the

museum

should

charge

the entrance fee

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for

the visitors.