Some people say that computer skills should be added to primary subjects in elementary school such as reading, writing and math. How far do you agree or disagree?

Dear Macauley, How is everything going? I recently won two concert tickets
this
week and I’m writing to invite you to the show. The event is Burnaboy’s headline concert, taking place
next
week Saturday at Eko Hotel and Suites in Victoria Island, Lagos. Time is 8pm, but I advise coming earlier to avoid traffic jams. My office sent a quiz to all staff about the company’s products and I was one of the
first
people to answer correctly, so they gave me two
concerts
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concert
tickets as my reward. Luckily for me, the actual winner wasn’t interested in the concert so they gave me the tickets as the runner up. The reason I’m inviting you is because you’ve been a Burnaboy fan for as long as I can remember and your house is just close by the venue which should make commuting a lot easier compared to others I had in mind. Hope to hear your feedback soon. Best Regards Mark

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