Some people say that computer skills should be added to primary subjects in elementary school such as reading, writing and math. How far do you agree or disagree?

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Dear Macauley, How is everything going? I recently won two concert tickets

this

week and I’m writing to invite you to the show. The event is Burnaboy’s headline concert, taking place

week Saturday at Eko Hotel and Suites in Victoria Island, Lagos. Time is 8pm, but I advise coming earlier to avoid traffic jams. My office sent a quiz to all staff about the company’s products and I was one of the

first

people to answer correctly, so they gave me two

concerts

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concert

tickets as my reward. Luckily for me, the actual winner wasn’t interested in the concert so they gave me the tickets as the runner up. The reason I’m inviting you is because you’ve been a Burnaboy fan for as long as I can remember and your house is just close by the venue which should make commuting a lot easier compared to others I had in mind. Hope to hear your feedback soon. Best Regards Mark

Tue Dec 03 2019

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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