Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A number of people believed that it is advantageous to be involved in sporting activities composed of

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members while others considered that single player physical games are more beneficial.

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, from my opinion, I prefer playing sports individually rather than engaging in sports as a group. To commence with, people who participate in

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games benefits in distinct ways.

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, from my experience, there are always people who were afraid and were timid of involving in sports competitions by themselves in high school sports competitions.

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, being in a

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tends

to eliminate the issue, as it b

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boosts

the self-esteem and confidence in each i

ndividuals.

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individual

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,

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sport games may result in arguments between members when the

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failed to succeed in the competition.

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, a handful of individuals favoured playing sports individually.

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can be advantageous, because the success of each individual is not affected by other members.

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, from historical sports events,

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members tend to blame other

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members for their poor performance in the game, while single athletes do not confront

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uch issue

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such issues

the such issue

as the competition only involved single athletes, rather than a group.

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, it reduced

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conflicts and controversial issues about the matches and games performed.

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, individual sporting activities required more efforts to be victorious, as it depends upon a single player performing in a competitive event. To recapitulate, despite

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sports activities may have the above positive aspect, personally, I believe it is more crucial to avoid problems that occur

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within the

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players after the game.

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, individual sporting games would be recommended, as one’s success r

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relies

upon one’s investigated e

ffort

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efforts

to achieve an ideal successful outcome concurrently, eradicate destructions arose from o

ther individuals’ weak performance.

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the other individuals’ weak performance